I read it again tonight, and I agree with you. It had potential, but it needed another draft, and an editor to say "no" to certain choices.
There are positives to it. Rogue does seem to be happy and unambiguously in love with Gambit, and vice versa. Their banter at the start of the chapter is cute, though I'd have liked Remy to push back more when Rogue tells him to show her mothers the responsible man she married. He's self-deprecating, but, really, why would he want to impress either Mystique or Destiny? Even a "Why? So Raven can try to sleep with me again?" or "I showed her that when I turned her down" would have been better. Gambit should have more edge.
I enjoyed her little speech about their wedding day, and how thrilled she was about it all. And I enjoyed Destiny stating that they were a "when" and not a "if," especially after reliving Rogneto.
With that said, I do find it hard to get past Rogue making fun of Gambit with Destiny, and I think it's the context. If she were talking with Storm, it would be fine (mostly, outside the Anna-banana song which should have been nixed)! They both know and love Gambit in their different ways, and the light roasting would have come off very differently. But Destiny has been horrific to Gambit, and so it feels like Rogue is throwing him under the bus to make her mom happy. I don't think that was the author's intent, I think it was meant to come across as silly and funny in a "oh, husbands" sitcom humor way, but that intent didn't translate on the page.
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