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Hi, my name is Milo, and I'm an aspiring comics writer. I have written a short Batman comic which is a work in progress at the moment. I just wanted to show what I've got so far. I would happily take any feedback and advice from anyone who has written comics.
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[QUOTE=Milo;6015845]Hi, my name is Milo, and I'm an aspiring comics writer. I have written a short Batman comic which is a work in progress at the moment. I just wanted to show what I've got so far. I would happily take any feedback and advice from anyone who has written comics.
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I love the panel layouts especially on that last page. Keep up the good work!
[QUOTE=thwhtGuardian;6016033]I love the panel layouts especially on that last page. Keep up the good work![/QUOTE]
Thank you. If I may ask, do you think the action flows well from one panel to another?