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Don't be confused. Take it at face value. Maintain your "messy" style however look at any panels where it might be going overboard, to where it's detracting from your story, i.e. it's hard to tell...

Davidmalyn,

To me stiff implies not fluid. Could be a chunk of dialogue, or a plot device... It's likely not pacing. More likely than not, it's not seeming natural or realistic in some way. ...

I agree. Keep the feedback coming. It's definitely helpful to see. I'm postulating that "not bad" means "good".

I'd take that as it is and fix. Double check perspectives and anatomy issues/proportion throughout and correct where needed. Ensure the figure work is strong, the characters pop with clean lines. ...

Would anyone mind sharing their writing feedback?