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The conclusion to the first part of the struggle against the Organization.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/14-bt1tFGy-Rj0E6zYbbkEj8R7lxgxgyoPhKfP48PMbs/edit

The second part, the beginning of the war with the Organization.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_0doGugYypBf1PvvmHhPYIktWoaqrpciyHHBbSpREk8/edit

I'd like to post the next story in the Robin and Power Girl chronicles.
It involves a struggle between the entire Superman family and a group they come to call the Organization.
Eventually, the...

I'm posting the last of the Robin and Power Girl chronicles back story.
It is the conclusion of Grayson Family Values, Part 3 which involves a lengthy discussion of Krypton.

I've thought a...

Not to interrupt the two of you.

But I wanted to post the second part of The Grayson Family Values screenplay.

It involves the conclusion to the struggle against the Joker, along with...

I was glad to see you work in Betty Kane.

I thought about having her as part of a backstory high school romance with my Robin stories.

But she just seemed more appropriate for Earth-1, not...

I'm going to start posting the second screenplay of the Robin and Power Girl chronicles.
I've tried different techniques in writing the series: the second screenplay is a little different in that...

Thanks for posting this.

I'll be honest that it will take several reads to understand it all.

What you have done is perhaps to create an Earth 1.5. One that is an
amalgam that includes...

Three weeks is a long time to wait. But it is unavoidable. Sometimes it is hard to be patient.
The stops and starts makes it hard on a viewer.

It was nice to see Jon come clean at last to...

Thanks for your answers.

I have found the q and a helpful as I think through larger issues with my own writing.

There has been lots of discussion about Krypton around here.

Probably...

I enjoyed the show. But some things resonate more with me, than others.

I don't buy the rationalization about Jon and Candice. I mean how far down that
road is Jon going? She's a drug...

It's been a rough week for me. But I seem to finally be recovering.

I found your story interesting. I did have a few questions, maybe this is all
gets explained by the second part.
...

I do appreciate your comments.

For myself the act of putting words on screen is enough.

I will say the series does change over time.

Starting with #4 the backstories, the pregnancy...

Here is the final section of The Dance.

First a word about Ancient Egypt. I did intend when planning the first screenplay to have some super heroics
included toward the ending part of the...

I took another read. You are right, she is pretty direct toward the end of the document.

I was thinking of page 3 where she does less of that.

I think that Lois has this very clipped, don't beat around the bush way of speaking.
When I write Lois I try to remind myself of the way that Margot Kidder or Bitsie Tulloch like to speak.
You...

Thanks for posting this.

I know it can be nerve racking material that you have spent a lot of time developing.

A strength of your writing is the slow building. You have a sense that...

I don't object that much to being in Smallville.
It is just that Smallville can be more than boring small town politics.
I don't really care who wins the mayoralty of Smallville.
Sure the...

I believe that it is now fixed.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jQJ-zINnUIx1RvMEHdKEM7Efleu_H8hiqQS7cDwJUCM/edit

Real world economics is never a strong suit of superhero TV shows.
The sense they have conveyed, but not really shown, is that Clark is engaged in farming.
I think considering what a tough time...

Here below is the second part of the opening screenplay entitled The Dance.
The title in case anyone wonders comes from a Garth Brooks song, which is used to describe the relationship between...

I'm on the Superman forum daily.
I don't think we are really crying about Batman.
We are annoyed about how Superman is portrayed.
There is a difference.

I understand.

I think many of us on this thread feel that way.

I made a similar point on the CW forum on the Superman and Lois TV/film.
My point was we should not have Power Girl if it...

I think it is hard to improve on John Williams.
I'm not sure what the sound would be, if it is not the triumphal orchestra.
I would be curious to know?

I can't watch Titans anymore.
It is so ridiculous. Which for a DC person it takes quite a lot for me to say.
I know that I'm not alone around here.
The writing has been atrocious.
Donna...