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I'd probably keep reading, but:
1. Essentially the author has used one character's long-running monologue to introduce the world and story. That's fine if en media res is your goal and necessary,...

I'd like to open a dialogue with you on that. I agree that the book's "writing technique" is excellent, in the sense that it is economical, worded well, reads fluently, etc.

But writing is not...