The art in this is pretty great. Captain America is probably a tad too skinny, but whatever, overall I really liked the art here. The story telling on the other hand feels so heavy handed at times it's a surprise Waid can type on the keyboard. I'm almost surprised that went Captain America told the little girl he was draping in the American flag that he just woke up that "I" was the bolded word and not "WOKE".
So ten years ago the Naz...I mean Rampart ran this country. Oh, I wonder who the president was ten years ago? And then they come back now.
Why made up this new lame ass organization for Captain America to fight? I mean, I know, white power supremacist militias are a huge problem now, so it's very topical. Especially all those suicide bombing white supremacist, they've been a problem on and off for like 16 years now.
Maybe you don't need two descriptors back to back about how Captain America moves. "YOU EVER SEE HIM IN ACTION? NO? LEMME TELL YOU, ITS LIKE A BALLET. ("Comedy beat") WITH PUNCHING."
next page, cut to random person talking
"AND I REMEMBER THE WAY HE TUMBLED THROUGHT THE AIR LIKE AN OLYMPIC ACROBAT."
Pick one. You don't need two pages of two different people saying Captain America moves gracefully. They're both saying the same thing. It's like Waid came up with two different versions of the same thing and accidentally left them both in the script...and then the editor somehow missed it.
I don't get this Hydra Cap new magic Cap thing. Like, Hydra Cap was the real Cap. But then this comic seemingly starts out by telling you they're retconning that, which find, whatever, probably best to pretend that mess happened differently. But then during the part where everyone is saying why they're there, there's that black guy that starts talking about it. So is ten years ago Cap Hydra Cap? It'd make sense, given Hydra Cap was the real actual Cap and this Cap is a new Magic Idea Cap that was created by the little girl Cosmic Cube. The comic doesn't actually say this Cap remembers anything about being in that town either. Doesn't say he remembers Rampart, or any of the people ten years ago Cap met either. This does end with New Magic Cap Consept saying something Ten Years Ago Cap said, but then Hydra Cap was meant to be a deep undercover agent that did everything and acted just like Cap until he truely revealed his real self. Oh man, what a stupid terrible mess Secret Empire was. It messed up things so badly that in universe the Cap that did all the things in the stories you liked was revealed to have always been a Nazi and was killed, and to get something that looks like Captain America back a little girl that a Cosmic Cube had to make one based on an idea that Secret Empire says never existed. Wonder what the pitch for Secret Empire was: I want to Secret Wars Hail Hydra only...shitty and over two years, and I want to do the "Spider-Man was a clone the whole time" thing but a million times worse?
I really don't get Rampart. Are they meant to be a small handful of the towns local dummies? They staged their first stab at a takeover in the middle of nowhere, so I'm guessing they're from around there, can't see like ten or less people coming together from all across America to attack some tiny out of the way town in Nebraska. They tried attacking once, then ten years later in 2017 they came back stronger than every (get it) to take over again. Is this a joke? It feels like a joke. Why not have Captain America fight an actual threat for the big new inaugural issue for the return of Captain America? Instead of doing something cool we get Captain America fighting some bad joke villains in an attempt at some half-assed political point. Worst is before the leader hilariously blows himself up he hints that Rampart might be some kind of big long term thread. Great. Because after two years of HYDRA I'm sure what people want in an ongoing arc in which Captain American fights some lame ass Not-HYDRA group for half a year or longer. Seems like a great move, real smart.
Waid trying to write modest Cap might be the dumbest thing in the whole comic. Some girl tells Captain America he's a INSPIRATION, to which Captain America retorts "WHY? BECAUSE IM TALL AND I HAVE A SHIELD?" Then he starts pointing out how people just did stuff and didn't even need to be "inspired" by him. But–And this seems like a pretty big but–Waid seems to have forgot he set this whole story in Captain America, Nebraska during a fuckin' Captain America Festival. He also seems to have forgotten he spent three pages of this comic having people come up on stage talking about how Captain America has inspired them, and why they love him so much. So loved by these people is Captain America they they're still showing up to festival for him even after all the Hydra Cap stuff. So loved by that town is Captain America that even after Hydra Cap they're still called Captain America. You know Mark, if you're going to end your comic with some statement about how people don't need to be inspired, maybe don't set that story at a festival where everyone is their because they're inspired by Captain America.
Is it weird that this comic has a three page backup story about the Origin of Captain America, when the comic opens with a one page story about the Origin of Captain America? Is it weird the one page version does it better? Is it weird they both get his origin wrong because it's not about how a little girl named Kobik that's a living Cosmic Cube created a Captain America based on the concept of what he would have been if she hadn't messed with time to make the real Captain America a sleeper Nazi HYDRA agent?