Results 1 to 15 of 52

Hybrid View

Previous Post Previous Post   Next Post Next Post
  1. #1
    Extraordinary Member AmiMizuno's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2014
    Posts
    9,232

    Default Wonder Woman villain: how would you fix him/her: Mouse Man

    I mean other than controlling rodents what else can you do with him?

  2. #2
    Moderator Nyssane's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2014
    Posts
    4,740

    Default

    He doesn't need to be fixed. Some villains are meant to be campy and goofy. And he's certainly less offensive than, say, Egg Fu.

  3. #3
    Astonishing Member Mutant God's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2014
    Location
    Boston
    Posts
    3,450

    Default

    A Nazi soldier apart of a small project that uses the occult to shrink men down into becoming a tiny army but when WW took it down before it was finish the unname soldier was the only one shrunken down and was forgotten by everyone else. Currently he plots to get his revenge on Diana for ruining his life by spying on her and her allies and delivering intel to her enemies.

  4. #4
    Astonishing Member WonderScott's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2014
    Location
    San Francisco, CA
    Posts
    4,554

    Default

    I'd give him size control abilities, a wererat form, telepathic control over vermin, and a couple of pet Apokorats as his allies.

    Go for the monstrous motif that's symbolic to Wonder villains.

    apokorats.jpg

  5. #5
    Extraordinary Member CRaymond's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2016
    Posts
    5,733

    Default

    Hmmm...

    Not everyone Diana faces should be physically superhuman, but instead be positioned to be difficult to resolve through diplomacy and kindness.

    Mouse Man should be an underbelly criminal, trading in information, using rodents as spies.

    Part of the reason I placed PalmerTech Laboratories in Gateway was so that Giganta could work there, and Mouse Man could steal some tech, thereby giving him size-changing powers too.

  6. #6

    Default

    I already did one in another thread. my version would be a brilliant but socially awkward young man with a barely concealed hatred of women yet an obsession over a fellow grad student. pursuing the field of cybernetics, he would have found some way to remote view through the eyes of rats; who he had (quite illegally) surgically altered. he would use these rats to spy on the classmate and, gradually, ruin her life (as her friends & romantic interest are scared off). I imagine that Wonder Woman gets involved after the young woman exhausts her other resources (it's kind of hard to explain to police that some unseen force is spying on you and messing with your belongings). fast forward past the escalation, him confronting his victim, and encountering Wonder Woman. by accident or his own fault, "Mouse Man" finds himself unable to return to his physical form. so he would spend some time trapped in the minds of several rats. by the next appearance, he would have (in desperation) uploaded his mind into an action figure sized robot/custom miniature of himself; used in the initial phases of his experiment. he also had an extensive toy collection. the humiliation makes him even more deluded than usual. so covers himself up in that mouse costume. so the goal of my "fix" was to pin down the science. he didn't create a shrinking serum and a way to control mice. he used technology to project his mind and control smaller minds. i thought it was fitting that he basically trapped/isolated himself; after what he did to his earlier victim.
    Last edited by Michael Watkins; 01-10-2018 at 05:16 PM.

  7. #7

    Default

    Quote Originally Posted by Mutant God View Post
    A Nazi soldier apart of a small project that uses the occult to shrink men down into becoming a tiny army but when WW took it down before it was finish the unname soldier was the only one shrunken down and was forgotten by everyone else. Currently he plots to get his revenge on Diana for ruining his life by spying on her and her allies and delivering intel to her enemies.
    ?wouldn't he be...geriatric? or is this a Magneto situation?

  8. #8
    Astonishing Member Mutant God's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2014
    Location
    Boston
    Posts
    3,450

    Default

    Quote Originally Posted by Michael Watkins View Post
    ?wouldn't he be...geriatric? or is this a Magneto situation?
    Maybe the magic slowed down the aging process or maybe all the exercise running around and climbing up things made him a very strong and flexible old man.

  9. #9
    Uncanny Member MajorHoy's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2014
    Posts
    29,974

    Default

    Not being a veterinarian, I'm not sure of the exact procedures involved in fixing/neutering a "Mouse Man".

    (Other than the cruder "Lorena Bobbitt" method.)

  10. #10
    Mighty Member
    Join Date
    May 2015
    Posts
    1,905

    Default

    Quote Originally Posted by Nyssane View Post
    He doesn't need to be fixed. Some villains are meant to be campy and goofy. And he's certainly less offensive than, say, Egg Fu.
    I second this. Keep him as he is.
    Last edited by Lex Luthor; 01-12-2018 at 10:42 AM.

  11. #11
    Extraordinary Member AmiMizuno's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2014
    Posts
    9,232

    Default

    So if he is supposed to be goofy how can be written without making him overly goofy? I mean even many goofy villains have their great moments.

  12. #12
    Better than YOU! Alan2099's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2014
    Posts
    7,501

    Default

    Make him the evil version of Marvel's Squirrel Girl. Kinda silly looking and not entirly taken seriously, but a major threat whenever he shows up.

  13. #13
    Extraordinary Member AmiMizuno's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2014
    Posts
    9,232

    Default

    Quote Originally Posted by Alan2099 View Post
    Make him the evil version of Marvel's Squirrel Girl. Kinda silly looking and not entirly taken seriously, but a major threat whenever he shows up.
    True, so how do you see his costume design being like?

  14. #14
    Astonishing Member
    Join Date
    Apr 2014
    Posts
    2,116

    Default

    Quote Originally Posted by Alan2099 View Post
    Make him the evil version of Marvel's Squirrel Girl. Kinda silly looking and not entirly taken seriously, but a major threat whenever he shows up.
    How would he be a major threat to Wonder Woman, without WW jobbing to him? Squirrel Girl is a comedic character, really there is no way for her to beat Dr. Doom or Thanos, but the writers do it for a gag. That doesn't work for a villain the way it does a hero, you couldn't have Mouse Man defeat the clearly superior Wonder Woman, without fans thinking it demeans WW.

    Squirrel Girl works because she is a silly hero, the audience roots for her despite her goofiness, Mouse Man is a silly villain, the audience just wants him to be humiliated as a joke.

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •