So, as talked about in the preview thread, there's some problems with the timeline here. Since chapter 16, we seem to have time-skipped ahead a good bit. Domino is in her new solo outfit, and Logan has all of his injuries from his solo series. However, Logan says his injuries are from the monsters during his birthday. So if he's not lying and leaving things out, then the continuity is off. Because Logan was perfectly fine after that fight at the end of chapter 16. Then there's Domino's solo series. In the first chapter, Warpath is included in her group of ex boyfriends, which they're clearly still dating in this. We see some smoochies, then Creed making a joke about how they need private time. Warpath rebuttals they're on a mission, and Creed crassly asks if that's what they're calling it now.
On a positive note. Domino's characterization seemed better in this chapter. It didn't seem like we got the party girl ditz who's all about money and debauchery. We. imo, got a decent balance of a fun Domino, who also can be serious. She does some flirting with Warpath. But at the same time, her expressing concern over putting Creed in charge shows a better Neena. She treated the situation seriously and expressed genuine concern of Logan's choice, and the operation. Another instance being Warpath breaking into the facility where Omega Red escape. Domino notes his entrance was too noisy, and she could've done it more quietly. Also Yuriko finally clarifies that she's a cyborg. A grand correction since she was lumped in with the mutants in the first arc, and Taylor's ANW. Now this isn't perfect, and there's still holes. But it's good Pak made an attempt to acknowlege what this team does. They're the hunting unit in charge of dealing with renegade mutants, and racists trying to destroy their kind. Kitty has them as an official team, and lent them some wings for the black ops missions. Again, that doesn't explain everything. But at least some effort was made.
For any Creed fans, his characterization is still bad. I will refrain from ranting. But he's been written just as stupid and incompetent here as the last 20 chapters Pak has written him. First there's the opening scene where he's appointed leader. Warpath expresses tons of concern over that choice & Creed starts yelling at Warpath to drop and give him 20. He comes off like a 5-year-old playing soldier or a kid who's just been told that can be in charge and babysit. Later on, we see him speaking with Foreigner about an offer that's been made to him. He tells Creed he's got 24 hours to decide. We're getting a glimpse of evil Creed who's got some kind of subversive deals going on, despite the ending of the last chapter saying he's still inverted and not totally evil. We're told he's got good in him that's still in effect, but every action from him shows he's evil. There hasn't been any good balance -unlike what Bunn gave us. During the mission, Sabretooth has them split up into two teams. Him & Yuriko. Warpath & Domino. And Yuriko even points out that he divided up good guys & bad guys. Not to mention it's established Logan only put him in charge to give him something to do, so he wouldn't go berserk. And he's got Warpath as the babysitter to keep an eye on him.
Yuriko tells Creed she knows about his dealings with someone outside of the team, given her cyborg abilities. Creed wonders why she's not ratting him out to the others. She assures him that the others are boring, and she wants in with whatever he's planning. Domino & Warpath encounter Omega Red first, and he overpowers them while Creed makes a surprise attacks. Turns out he was using Dom & Warpath as bait. Omega gets Creed in his coils, and notes he's stronger & tastier. The team gets into a fight with the others under Red's command, and Red heads off with Sabretooth. Another bad moment being Creed yelling for his team to save him because you don't let the villain take your leader. Again, I am seeing a 5-year-old in a man's body there who had nave and preconceived ideas about what being in charge meant. And since when does Creed yell for people to save him? Unless he's being sarcastic. lol Also adding to the 5-year-old mentality was his comment to Warpath. The latter wonders who he's talking to on his phone, and Creed replies it's his mother setting up another date with him. Wow....
The chapter ends there. To be fair, if I had to grade this out if 5, then I would give it a 2. The art was good. Domino's characterization was better. Yuriko is properly classified. But as a Sabretooth fan, his characterization had me take 3 points instantly. lol |