So, everyone who used basic sense to guess that we were going from Bobby trolling the older sibs to the team casually ripping lives apart? You get a cookie. (On a baking sheet.)
The plot itself is pretty straight-forward: Dept. X goes to bring in a couple of third-strike intimacy offenders, intending to take them to Cerebro. But it turns out that one of them, Nezumi, is pregnant, and no one on the team has any idea how to deal with this. Literally. Due to Nate Grey’s meddling, the team has no conception (*rimshot*) of the processes, mechanics, or tells of pregnancy. All medical equipment meant to ensure safe, natural births was junked years ago. It’s considered such an unlikely situation that there’s not even criminal protocol for how to deal with a pregnant criminal. Reproduction is such alien territory that the guys have to ask the ladies if they can tell if Nezumi is pregnant by looking at her. In the end, Betsy confirms Nezumi’s story telepathically, and Blob decides the best thing to do is to deliver Nezumi’s lover to Cerebro, then take her back to their base and make her comfortable.
So, first chapter in, and the Intimacy Cops are literally harboring a sex criminal, and she hates them very, very much. This will surely not cause any tension or repercussions throughout this miniseries, oh no.
Williams also does great job setting up the character interactions here and foreshadowing where the fault lines are going to be as the disillusion sets in and the team begins to crack apart. We get a lot of Iceman this first chapter, and it’s seems that Bobby is Bobby in any universe - making lots of jokes to cover up the fact that he’s starting to lose the faith. By contrast, there’s Jubilee, who’s presented as the more mature of the two and concerned about doing right by the people they’re policing, even if it just means acknowledging their humanity in the process of taking them in.
Our other pair is Northstar and Moneta. Wee Moneta is a True Believer in Nate’s dream, and is immediately dismissive of anyone who isn’t. (Which makes sense if the theory that she’s a construct of Nate’s pans out.) She’s judgmental, quick to condemn people, and generally demanding, inflexible, and unpleasant. Northstar is her mentor - and if you’re familiar with Jean-Paul’s relationship with his sister, it’ll likely make sense why he’s tolerant of this obnoxious little bug. But rather than share in Moneta’s hardline stance, Northstar seems to be distancing himself from the work as much as he can; he’s just fine with being as hands-off as possible when it comes to the job. He buries it under snark and a sense of his own superiority, but he keeps out of this arrest entirely, even raises a mild protest when Blob announces the mission.
And then there’s Blob and Betsy. With Freddy Dukes, we get the sense that he’s someone who believes in the team’s mission, but seems to delude himself into thinking there’s a humane way to rip someone’s agency from them. He’s very much the, “Hey, everything’s OK. We don’t want anyone hurt, we’re here to help put you back on the right path. This won’t hurt a bit” guy. And, meta-wise, it’s actually genuinely sad to see a guy who’s been a villain for pretty much his entire published history literally brainwashed to think that he’s finally doing something to help people, when the reality is, he’s just a dog to a new despot. Betsy is largely a cipher for this chapter - we’re told that she’s “been through a lot”, and she and Blob definitely have A Moment during the arrest, where he gets so awkward around her that he almost literally turns and runs in the other direction when given an excuse to be elsewhere. But given that Betsy’s POV chapter is likely next issue, it seems like we’re going to make up for her lack of page time here.
Also, some of the world-building touches here are just chilling. The subtext that Moneta (and Nate) think it’s just fine that pregnancy is a potential death sentence, for example? That is a well-placed detail for an oppressive dystopia, given some of the arguments out in the real world when it comes to controlling women’s bodily autonomy. And it’s something that can almost sneak by unnoticed in the dark absurdity of the conversation surrounding it. Really good work on William’s part.
This is another strong chapter for AoXM, imo, in that it’s a built-in series of cliffhangers with escalating stakes. We’re poised to watch everything come crashing down in the messiest way, with the added weight that these characters are Nate’s enforcers. When their blinders inevitably drop, that’s endgame for Nate’s utopia. And there’s no way that’s going to happen without a fight.
Can’t wait to see it.