Howdy all,

I'm a new memeber, and joined to see if any of you kind folk could give me some advice!

I like writing story ideas for comics (they never come tyo anything) but recently I started writing what I thnk could become a short story. It's a detective/superhero story (nothing to do with The Bat!).

It's only 2 chapters long so far. I've sent it to friends to read and critique and give feedback, but no one seems to be willing/have the time.

Can anyone suggest a moderately newb-friendly place where I can submit some work and have people leave feedback? Maybe I could even post it somewhere on CBR?? It's only 1700-odd words, pretty short.

Muchos Gracias!!