I thought it was pretty good, the strange narration aside. But even that I got used to.

The Lana thing is way overblown. Yeah it was a serious crime attempt, but bad people can do seriously bad things. And those guys were messed up. People tried to commit a crime, and Clark stopped them. Its the story of his life. This is what he does, and sometimes people he cares about can be the attempted target, just like anyone else can potentially be a victim of anything.