First attempt let's see how it goes
Flash back kiwanna what's somone die
Prevent pages
Cable is tortured by a monster guy(close up of its face marking and glowing eye similar to cable, I think its implying the creature is og cable or at least uses og cables remains in its creation, I'd love to see if it destrution leads to og rebirth)
More kids that laura has to be told not to attack
Flash back kiwanna was sent to kill what would be apoth years but let it live, apoth is AI, after being spared it grew read the bible and grew
Apoth wants betsy to it self
Last to pages(best looking pages) apoth reviled to look like dr. Manhattan and kiwanna bening backward on her needs as he appears and is the only one to be able to see them. While Laura like the reader has no idea what's going on.
This could have been done in 3 pages, the creature with cable has far more intrest due to the similarity in its design with cable and explorer the posoblity of a corrupted OG 90 cable being villains as a result on new cables actions would have been better