Originally Posted by
Domino_Dare-Doll
It's actually really interesting that you feel the economic influence is important; I'm actually quite indifferent to that? But then, personal taste for each reader!
But on the abstract-ish point: it's really, really hard for some readers to feel that as tangibly as you do--is there any advice you might be able to give to help us out there, seeing as we're obviously not willing to up and abandon these characters? How can we make it feel a bit more tangible for ourselves as you do?
And, hey, you know I agree with you on that bit of the narrative: it's extremely contrived and, honestly, needed a bit more build up. Even if we get flashbacks, I'm sorry Hickman, it feels like an after-thought. You told too much without the show.