Originally Posted by
salarta
Okay, I'll try to explain that aspect of it a little better and more concisely, then either leave it at that (so I'm not doing tons of posts on this) or I can chat by PM.
I don't have an issue with Leah's writing so far. My concern is Lorna's circumstances on the book. I think they put her in worse shape than if she was not in anything. If she's not in anything, then she at least keeps intact an understanding that she has risen in X-Factor to a leadership level. By remaining on this book as a team member, doing nothing else, it's implied that Lorna serving as leader was a mistake, something she never deserved, and that her "rightful place" is to act as a supporting character for everyone else's stories. That she can boost Northstar to leadership, but she's not "good enough" or "interesting enough" to be a leader herself. It also implies that ANXF failed because of her, when that's not the case. It's a huge backwards step for her regardless of what Leah writes with her on the book.
Look at how much people think of Lorna merely as "Havok's girlfriend" with nothing else to offer due to how she's usually been written around him. She would have been better off not written with him than written poorly. Same applies here.
Of course I would want Lorna in all sorts of things - if treated right and respectfully. I want to see her history acknowledged, and her potential explored. But if it's going to do more to hurt than help her, then I don't want it. It needs to be a net positive.