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I actually liked that twist and thought it made sense for the overall setting, that in a world where corporate-driven scientific R&D had directly or indirectly created superheroes and supervillains, that the more corrupt of those corporations (and their cronies in the political and military spheres) would use comparatively pettier crimes committed by supervillains to keep superheroes distracted from using their powers, abilities, and/or resources to enact meaningful changes and improvements in society that would lessen those corporations' power, stature, and influence.
The spider is always on the hunt.
They adapted it in the latest cartoon.
The book selling as well as it did says otherwise at least as far as how far fans are willing to follow a villain protagonist (or a villain playing the hero).I don't think spinning 30 issues of Otto owning and coming up on top can be undone or cancelled because Otto went "Scusi! Mille regretti" at the end.
It's not good drama certainly.
She helped MJ take down FemElectro too.Carlie had MJ meet the Lookouts (which hasn't shown up in a single issue since that one) and then helped her pack luggage. And then sorta served as expositor for the rise of the Sin-Eater. That's not a great deal at all.
As you said it was five episodes rather than a full season.
Civil War also sold well as did Maximum Carnage (in fact eyeball wise, those two sold far better than Superior) and Michael Bay sells well too.The book selling as well as it did says otherwise at least as far as how far fans are willing to follow a villain protagonist (or a villain playing the hero).
I don't think "selling well" is immunity from criticism or actual dramatic flaws in a set-up.
Last Remains will likely read better when collected in a trade. The major problem is that it is padded. We've had issue after issue of Harry screaming at Peter "confess!"and smacking him around just to prove how powerful he is. The Sin-eater stuff ultimately went nowhere. The Order Of The Web stuff (especially in the astral plane segment) could have been skipped over.
People just want it to be over with due to the fact it has been dragging on. They want answers (we will get more questions more than anything).
With Hunted the extra issues made sense. This was just a cash grab.
I agree. It's why I never like Superior until after it was done. It was basically moving the goal posts while the game was still being played out. Too many plot contrivannces, poor characterization, trying so hard to show Otto could be a good guy... if only he had Peter's upbringing/a positive influence (which is something Slott did try to get across).
Well, the game and the movie both set out with the intent that Otto would be sympathetic from the get-go. But the comic version was just a flat out bad guy as that is what he was designed to be. It took a lot of back-peddling to try and change that around for Superior to work.
Superior Spider-Man doesn't really work if you read it by itself...i.e. just the 30 issues of Superior, you need to have read Dying Wish, and even that story is a payoff to stuff Slott introduced in #600 and then again in Spider-Island (which happens to be better than anything else Slott did after that), and Ends of the Earth. So the weak setup and foundation is a problem for the entire story. And that's why I call it "KLH with padding". Had Slott not had the platform (ASM 2 times a month) he would have been driven to pare it down, because telling Superior as a monthly story necessitates a certain economy. The issue of padding the story for so long also led to decisions like the entire supporting cast and fellow Avengers completely losing their minds so that they buy and fall in with Otto's deception. If Slott didn't have so much time and space to tell his story, stuff like say writing the supporting cast out of the story or other superheroes off-world or busy with adventures somewhere could have been justified. It doesn't work if you are stretching it for some 20 odd issues over a year bi-monthly, so that means you have to make everybody a moron in order for your character to come off as smart.
The padding of Superior is what ruined the story...but at the same the padding is the story. What defines Superior is a gimmick and a stunt, having Otto-in-Peter run around all Spider-Man titles and team-ups for more than a year and so on. Had Superior been told as a contained story it wouldn't have been memorable and the flaws of Doctor Octopus acting like the Chameleon would have been remarked on from the get-go.
Slott said more than a few times that Superior was supposed to lead into Spider-Verse but the fact was that the second Garfield Spider-Man was coming up, and Marvel wanted Peter back in the costume on the racks when the new issue came out.
The other is that when he pitched Spider-Verse at a Marvel summit (a kind of get-together where writers-editors and others gather socially and pitch ideas and get feedback from peers), most of them gave their opinion that a storyline that was a crossover of every adaptation and alternate version of Peter Parker needed to have 616 Peter at the center and not Otto-in-Peter.
So that's why the end of Superior feels so rushed and why the return of Peter is so underwhelming. In fact, Slott didn't fully write the conclusion to his signature story. The dialogue of that issue was co-written by Christos Gage. Do you remember when Alan Moore punted part of the writing duties of say, Swamp Thing's last issue to another writer? Do you remember when Frank Miller let somebody else finish the last issue of Born Again? Or for that matter, Dematteis on KLH?
Obviously there might be other deadline issues and so on, but I think a writer offloading the climax of the story, and with the return of the main character to boot to someone else, is a big tell (regardless of intent) of how one should interpret the nature of the final issues of the story.
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Yknow had 54 been a expository dump I think 55 could be pretty great, but the added danger of restored evil Norman and Kingpin means that the events of 55 are guaranteed to be disrupted and probably only give us a lingering sense of the bigger picture. What's a bummer is there is alotta dialogue heavy stuff between Peter/Harry that would work great, and really there should be quite a bit given the friendly terms theyve been on rather to continue to keep punching each other instead. It seems like Last Remains was built to raise more questions than answer them, and rereading 50-54, Kindred's preemptive reveal in 50, Sin-Eater's plot through the .LR issues, and The Order's plot all weigh down the story significantly, basically dampening story beats that are great in Last Remains.
Kindred's identity reveal in 50 feels so tacked on by editorial probably from people complaining about how long it was taking it completely spoils the reveal in #53 which wouldve been a aboslute gut punch, and it instead just leaves the buildup and tension of 53 to be something we already know.
Sin-Eater's crisis of faith and hunting Molurn doesnt really go anywhere in the plot as 54.LR reveals, if they wanted his end to be the same, they shouldve just had Kindred manifest Carter again after the demons were removed from the Order and return to him, and have Carpenter take him down the same way as 53.LR, it wouldn't of made quite the difference since Molurn's powers didnt really shine at all and Sin-Eater just offs himself quickly. Or just rewrite the story a bit if keeping the Sin-Eater story in to have him confront Kindred after discovering the truth to be a plot device/expository machine to help Parker get the upper hand.
I've seen others say the same thing but Kaine/Ben/Otto not being here, especially with Kindred's comments really seems off. If they end up being a deus ex machina to the plot in 55 itd be nice but also feel unearned given theyve been completely absent from the story, despite really being thematically important.
Yeah he eventually corrected it, but what I meant was that Free Comic Book Day issue, where Rhino is a villain randomly attacking the city just because.
Well, that and people have an idea of what happened with Superior and Peter going worldwide, and you have to know those things, otherwise it feels like fake character development, like "Oh I did those bad things, but I correct them in this issue, so whatever" lol.
At it's core that story is just an episodic villain battle, a good one, but ultimately you just need to know Spidey.I mean does anyone need to read Dennis O'Neil's run to appreciate "Nothing can stop the Juggernaut"
Well, Gwen is mostly unconscious in that story, and then she dies, the story is more about her death than her as a person.or for that matter any story with Gwen Stacy to appreciate "The Night Gwen Stacy Died".
Not that reading her stories give her any more depth than "She likes Peter and hates Spider-Man" lol.
Slott really likes to make Otto beat Peter in moments like this, hell, his return in Clone Conspiracy relied on that, since Ben was making a clone of Otto's body, who logically would have Peter's mind, and Otto had to kill the mind of that clone to get that body back... Yeah lol.I think that's cutting Superior way too much slack. The point about Superior is that this was a stunt and a gimmick not a real storyline with a beginning-middle-end. Slott never intended Superior to end the way it did. It was supposed to end with Spider-Verse but the storyline wore its welcome out internally and they wanted Peter back, and that's among other reasons why Peter's return feels so underwhelming...and the fact that the return of Peter feels so anti-climactic as compared to his humiliation and defeat in Dying Wish and the 9th issue undercuts the entire moral and thematic agency of the story. In KLH, Peter's return was epic as f--k. Not the case here. Peter had agency in KLH in choosing to return whereas in Superior and before, he's just passive.
Funny thing is that, last time Stern used her in ASM#239, it's heavily implied she still has her powers and knows that Peter is Spider-Man still, so he left that open for anyone who wanted to use, but also made it so that she still may not know.Roger Stern referred to some of Dennis O'Neil's stories in his run too. His famous "Nothing can stop the Juggernaut" spun out of a need to resolve a subplot that O'Neil had left him (namely the character that O'Neill introduced, Madame Web, knew Peter's identity, which Stern didn't like) so he came up with a story to make her suffer amnesia, and expanded on that to the extent that nobody cares about that incidental detail on reading that story.
So just because Spencer refers to stuff in Slott's run doesn't give it value. "Nothing can stop the Juggernaut" hasn't, to my knowledge, made people read up every Madame Web story, nor do people who praise it go "to really appreciate this you need to read the O'Neill run".
It already falls apart because everyone loses all their IQ around Otto to only suspect something is up, but ultimately never thing much of it lol.
And she showed up less than Randy in Spencer's own run... Like, before Sins Rising, I think she only showed up in the issue with her return, where she introduces that support group, and then in that date with MJ issue, where I think she helped defeat Electra?I don't think he's trying to make everyone read every Carlie Cooper storyline either but he felt her worth enough to include in his run to a certain extent several times. She's had more to do than Randy has.
Slott had at least 3 situations where a character makes an assessment of Peter, which he doesn't offer a rebuttal to, implying they're right, the Otto one isn't even the first one, the other two are these:
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(ASM#672)
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(ASM#23 vol 4)
And the curious thing is that, not only all 3 assessments are wrong with if you keep Spider-Man's character in mind, they're wrong even by Slott's own interpretation of Spidey, since Carlie is wrong, Peter is not a costume, he's both Peter and Spidey, and Slott shows that. Otto is wrong, Peter doesn't self sabotage as Horizon Labs itself showed that Peter was trying to use the science for good, and Big Time even has him getting nervous when he can't come up with ideas. Gwen is wrong, as Peter tries to find happiness, as in Slott's own run he dated a few women, and tried to get together with MJ... It's so weird Slott writes the character and misses the point of stuff he himself wrote...
Of course, maybe Carlie and Gwen are supposed to be wrong, as Carlie doesn't know Peter that well, and Gwen doesn't know what Peter's life was like after her death, but Otto literally was in Peter's head and came to that conclusion, so he's more likely to be right... And fact that the scene with Carlie and Gwen plays out in a similar way is very noticeable...
but if that was Slott's point, then Peter after coming back to his body needed to admit right then and there that his doctorate was fake and false, he needed to divest himself of his company either say "Look this company means a lot and it's employing people but I can't be associated with this, i will sell all I have for pittance, I insist that the company be renamed from Parker Industries to...I don't know Horizon or Modell or Jaffrey Industries...but I won't have any part of that." Spencer bringing those chickens home to roost at the start of ASM#1 for me at least, (regardless if Spencer intended this or not) reads like a rebuke to that storyline.
His appearances are mostly glorified cameos until he started to date Janice, and even then he still doesn't do much.Not really. Carlie appeared in just five issues in Spencer's entire run, Randy has appeared in about 10.
Carlie was involved in introducing MJ to that support group, which was done more so to develop MJ, so Carlie didn't do that much there, but then she gets more involved with the plot and even makes interesting comments in Sins Rising, that's more than what Spencer's Randy did.
I'm pretty sure Deb wasn't even name dropped in Spencer's run, and so far she definitely didn't show up yet.
You being serious or sarcastic?
If serios, it's a status quo post ASM#700, where Otto takes over Peter's body for 30 issues, and ASM is replaced with "Superior Spider-Man", but Peter came back in the finale and ASM returned as well, that's the gist of it
Think I made a comment last year or so in how it'd be cool to make Daredevil have a retcon that shows he started to fight normal villains, realized what was going on, and went after those guys after a while, that way the differences between his earlier stories and current ones can make sense.
Don't forget Clone Saga, sold so well that it's the sole reason it overstayed its welcome to such an extent lol.
If true, not really surprised... For whatever reason, writers who tease such stuff, like to keep teasing forever, and Last Remains doesn't feel like a story to conclude anything, I even doubt Kindred is gonna be defeated lol.
I remember Slott saying once that his favorite characthers were the f@#$ ones, so i feel that his crticism toward Peter are intended to be taken at face value, but apparently even him can keep that idea straight. Speaking of Slott i finally almost finish with his run, i just need to read Go Down Swinging and his annual and i'm done. P.S Venom Inc was really stupid and the rest of his legacy issues are very bland.
I'm pretty sure that Jness was talking about Jack's comment about Superior ending sooner than Slott intended.
"Wow. You made Spider-Man sad, congratulations. I stabbed The Hulk last week"
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He's also a super-hero who risks his life literally everyday 'cause New York has some douchebag trying to rob a bank or nuke it every 5 seconds, and he tries to stop them all, so yeah, one could figure that having a life ensurance would be helpful, specially back during JMS' run when he was married.
Even then, this isn't about irresponsibility, it's about him being short sighted, this is just one example.
I was comparing the level of hyper competence lol.The Batgod is a rich kid who had access to the best gym teachers...Peter's a poor kid who had to figure out all this by himself rather than operate a custom rig PC in his basement to help him solve crime. It's part of the general cultural tendency that we no longer have real compassion for the struggling poor scrapper even in an idealized sanitized form as Peter. And it's not an accident that the "teenage-izing" of Peter has generally removed class issues, and always frames Peter's story as about him needing validation.
It's like we can't imagine Spider-Man as Batman's equal anymore, when that was how Spidey was shown in JMD's Spider-Man/Batman crossover, heck in the original Marvel/DC TASM v. Superman crossover. In those stories, Spider-Man was treated as the colleague and equal of the World's Finest, whereas today he'd be treated as some Robin or Supergirl type.
Plus Slott's Peter hardly lacked money and had dumb gadgets too, like a fucking "Anti Sinister Six" suit, but my point is still mostly about hyper competence, and Batgod was only mentioned as a joke about Spidey's competence being that good in those moments.
Zdarsky started out so bad I dropped his comic for a while lol.That's why I feel the only way to make sense is to see this as a parody. Whereas Spencer does feel like he's writing Peter Parker the character and not a spoof, as did Chip Zdarsky, as did Tom Taylor.
He improved a lot though, very fast too, kinda funny his Spectacular#2 was just obnoxious to read, and Spectacular#6 was pretty good.
About the best thing that can support this idea that "Peter is the Superior Spider-Man" is that in the end, when things got too tough, Otto just gave up 'cause he couldn't handle it, while Peter just never stops as long as he can.That's part of why I think the whole "Peter was the Superior Spider-Man all along" which the story ends is so insincere, disingenuous and unconvincing. Slott's own writing betrays the thumbs on the scale, where his creative and imaginative sympathies lie, and fundamentally I do think that the point Slott is making (whether he intends it or not) is that Otto was Superior to Peter.
Even then, while that's something Peter has over Otto, it just feels like such a basic message.
It's like ASM#801, while that story is not wrong about Peter being a good hero 'cause he saves people from small crimes, it's such a basic message... And considering the kind of character Spidey is, which Slott was writing him for so long, that's all he can say? It really didn't help it when Zdarsky's Spectacular#311 came out not long after, and it felt like he understood Spider-Man better... Yeah.
Edit: Awshit, deleting spree, should've seen that coming lol.
The superhero stuff wouldn't be covered in Life Insurance especially since he has a secret identity. He could pass his injuries as accidents and so on but that would be committing insurance fraud. (Can you get Life Insurance if you are a superhero? That feels like a Fantastic Four kind of story...I mean who can insure a family that do not have regular mortal biology, and basically have free healthcare since they are the only beings who can heal and treat anything that can potentially injure them?).
The "Peter just never stops" thing is undercut by the fact that nothing Peter did helped him get his body back. He was basically some backup "break glass when it's time to end story" switch. So yeah...that dog doesn't walk even if it is a basic message as you said. Even that basic message is disingenuous.About the best thing that can support this idea that "Peter is the Superior Spider-Man" is that in the end, when things got too tough, Otto just gave up 'cause he couldn't handle it, while Peter just never stops as long as he can.
The message is that Spider-Man doesn't save the world because he's not Thor or Black Panther but he helps the regular people and saves lives. That entire point has a kind of condescension because it implicitly assumes that "saving the world" stuff matters or counts for more...it's the "below my pay grade" thing from MCU Homecoming writ large. It's the equivalent of saying doctors and nurses or first responders aren't as heroic as astronauts or soldiers. To internalize that as a vallid sentiment is to surrender ground to a toxic concept to start with.It's like ASM#801, while that story is not wrong about Peter being a good hero 'cause he saves people from small crimes, it's such a basic message...
It's also hypocritical on Slott's part since so much of his run had Peter involved in bizarre high concept stories...like Parker Industries, Go Down Swinging, Spider-Verse, Clone Conspiracy, and even before that Spider-Island. Slott himself never wrote or cared much about Peter in a working-class reality (and going by most of his output, I don't think he has an interest in that in general...which fair enough write what you like)...it's like now at the end you are affirming a version of Spider-Man you didn't write. It's a bit like assuming you wrote Paul Jenkins' Spider-Man when you didn't.
So much of Slott's take is rooted in genre and not in real life. Take "No one dies" the big emotional punchline of that is "bad characters in comics come back from the dead more often than good characters" and like really...that's your take on grief. You are getting meta on grief?! The art in that comic and Slott's run in general is often a lot better than the writing deserves. It's probably the outstanding example of a Spider-Man run where the art was so far better than the writing.