I think the dialog is deliberately cringe-worthy.
And I don't think Hyperion broke Dr Juggernaut's hand. The sentence is incomplete but I think Hyperion just broke his grip on his throat. In the Coulson montage page later on, they're still slugging it out.
Definitely Ed McGuinness is delivering here. His style is so bombastic to me and a book filled with characters bashing on each other is right up his alley. Factoring in Aaron's plot/writing I would give the whole thing a C +. I will get the next issue but right now I'm not ranking it a "must read" mini event.