Yeah this was awesome! The whole chapter and his Rorschach delivered too!
I think dialogue is his big failing. People just sound convoluted at times. I even don’t mind the tone. New Gods nitpick, everyone looks and acts like Kalibak. The New Gods even Darkseids pantheon are colorful. His whole Krypton aesthetic looked like Jodoroskys Metabarons, I liked that in the end.