would my story on wattpad make a good or okay graphic novel/comic book?

[Flamehulking]

it has been my dream to make a graphic novel or comic book with my idea, but i decided to write it first, so i wrote it on wattpad and posted it on a forum and people said they are not hating on my story but grammar i am not really good at writing stories since i'm only 13 and i'm only a beginner on writing stories. so i am taking some art classes so i could make my graphic novel since i don't want to give up on my dream to make a comic book of my idea. http://www.wattpad.com/story/2120037...n-from-day-one would you read my summary and see if it would be a okay idea for a graphic novel or comic i know my grammar would be bad if you read my story but it would be nice if you guys could give me some helpful advice since i really wanna do good on this comic.

[Jeff Brady]

I'm not going to read your story. I am, however, going to give you the best writing advice possible:

Keep writing. Write every day. If you're not writing, you should be reading.

[ish kabbible]

I won't bother reading either.My advice is start small. Short stories. One Act Scenes. Small,to the point,learn how to write characters,a story with a beginning,middle and end. Master the short story before moving to bigger ones. You'll ger more feedback that way also. And read,read,read..not just comics but real books