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    Quote Originally Posted by Soubhagya View Post
    Can you read my mind? This was the kind of thread i wanted for a long time. I am not much of a reading fanfiction type. But like any fan i have thought of a lot of stuff about stories i want to read in Superman stories. Some of them i have posted here and there.





    And this is good. The pitch as you have mentioned is cool. Reading this makes me wish this was a real thing. And the way you have written it gives me an idea. If i would write what i want that would take up a lot of time. Writing characters, dialogue, etc. requires skill and time. But if i try like this i maybe able to write something after all. Which could be expanded into full stories if i want to. Thanks man.

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    Whatever format works for you. I generally just write up plots, while I may do something more expansive with something else. It's fanfic, so anything goes!

    Thanks for checking out my submission. Looking forward to seeing what you cook up.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Soubhagya View Post
    I have a pitch. Let me just mention it. To write up something may take some time. To put it in simpler terms, think of this like Superman in the Wild West, set in space. He's like a 'Man with No Name' from Dollars trilogy or Yojimbo. He goes from planet to planet, like such heroes go from town to town, never settling in one place. Fighting, setting things right and going to the next town and adventure. For him that would be the next planet. With me till now. Lets go old school.
    That's kinda my idea for superman.I would have kept Superman a notourious outlaw who fights for the little guy.Mine was basically inspired by samurai movies,westerns and one piece ofcourse which has the ultimate man of action.Note-man of action is what i believe clark should be at his core.A guy in jeans and tshirt.
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    Used to write fanfics a while back, considering getting back into it and Superman is definately on my mind. Here are some of the ideas ive got

    1. Superman: Crimson Eclipse (Superman and Hellsing crossover)

    A cabal of refugee vampires, seeking freedom from the curse of undead existance. Have traveled to metropolis to appeal to Superman both for protection and aid. Both the Hellsing and Iscariot organisation, have also come, hunting for a vampire cult they believe are linked to this cabal. Superman must now face the difficulty of protecting this cabal that look to him as their last chance for salvation, keep the peace between iscariot and hellsing aswell as be prepared for a slew of supernatural threats that are making their way to Metropolis.

    (The story would feature an uneasy truce that Superman forces between both the hellsing organisation and iscariot which will force him to work with Alucard and Seras Victoria. To help aid him against the oncomming supernatural threats, Clark will be enlisting the aid of both john constantine and the angel zauriel to help keep the iscariot organisation at bay. The antagonist that will be of focus in the story will feature Count Orlock and Camilla the bloody countess being established as ancient rivals of Alucard and threats strictly for him, Hellsing and Iscariot. Due to neither of them having the capability to challenge superman directly, Camilla and Orlock will enlist the aid of Mongul to help them challenge Superman. The main antagonist of the story will later be revealed to be a Kryptonian demon named Rakkar (antagonist from Kurt Busieks Superman 666 the beast from krypton) who has formed an alliance with a vampiric elder god like demon named Archeus (similar to the same Archeus from the buffy the vampire slayer comics who served as main antagonist in buffy the vampire slayer season 10 and Angel and faith season 2 comics). He will be revealed to be the true creator of the vampire race and along with Rakkar are manipulating Superman, Alucard and the others as puppets in a scheme to conquer and rule hell itself with mongul revealed as a close ally of theirs)

    2. The Mammal of Tomorrow (Superman and Zootopia crossover)

    Judy Hopps and Nick Wilde, find themselves accidentally transported to another world where animals remained primitive and humans rose to become the dominant lifeforms on earth. Frightened and terrified at both the savage predators and cruelty of humanity, nick and judy struggle desperately to survive in this strange, heartless world, while trying to find their way back home. Luckily for them, they are under the protection and have become close to someone who is just as lost as they are but knows how to navigate this world. His name, is Clark Kent, but the world one day will come to know him as Superman.

    (This story takes place in clarks very early young adult years when he had not yet chosen to reveal himself as superman and his powers were underdeveloped. Taking influence from many of superman's first adventure/establishment in metropolis stories like grant morisson's early new 52. When Judy and Nick show up, Clark had been living Metropolis for a few months and was struggling to get into a newspaper metropolitan while trying to deal with the crime, violence and other issues plaguing the area of suicide slums in metropolis. The antagonist of this story will be one of Superman's lesser known Villians, Maxim Zaroff aka Nimrod the hunter along with the millionaire tycoon morgan edge. Although I will be changing Nimrods backstory and personality to make him feel more original, likeable as a villian and credible as a threat to Clark. There will be no Kryptonite in this story, Instead Nimrod will use weapons forged from the element Promethium)

    3. The Mammal of Tomorrow 2: Battle for Eden (Zootopia and Superman crossover sequel)

    A sinister force is threatening to destroy the world of zootopia and as nick and judy try to face it, they are reunited with an old enemy who now serves a new master. To save their world, judy and nick will call on the help of one of their oldest and most powerful friends to save their world, but is Superman enough to face this oncomming force.

    (The primary villian in this story is darkseid and an evil alternate universe version of judy who darkseid has recruited as his apprentice. Nimrod the hunter will return, accompanied by deathstroke and the dc villian red lion to serve as a distraction for both dark judy and darkseid, leading an army of mercenaries and poachers upon Zootopia. The story will feature many exciting elements. Darkseid's avatar will appear in the form of a anthromorphic wolf called Thrope. Krypto the superdog will appear to assist Supes, Judy will become a new god in a plan ochestrated by Darkseid, Superman will be exposed to a specialised version of the night howlers that will transform him into superdoom and Krypto, Nick and Judy would be forced to fight him. Judy would be forced to kill Superman with a kryptonite sword given to her by darkseid as part of his schemes. A final fight between Superman, Krypto, Zootopia, Darkseid and a swarm of parademons will be the major climax of the story. The evil alternate Judy will have been established in a previous story focused only on zootopia and will be the empress of a distopian world where predators rule and she is their queen)


    4. Star-crossed travellers ( Superman and Transformers crossover)

    Set during clarks childhood when his powers were developing and focus's on the difficulty Jonathan and Martha had in trying to raise Clark with his ever expanding abilities. While at the same time recieving aid from beings akin to clark himself aswell as being drawn into a terrible civil war that has found its way onto their planet.

    (Set during Clarks childhood days, just as the war between autobots and decepticons has been brought to the planet. Megatron will be of focus in the story, only for an old rival of his called Darkmount/Straxus to appear with another decepticon named Switchblade. With Optimus Prime and his ex Elita One as the main autobots in the story. Optimus will develop a relationship akin to that of a mentor for clark aswell as second father figure while also helping to strengthen the father son relationship between Jonathan and Clark, while Elita One's relationship with Optimus is also explored thanks to the help of martha and jonathon).

    5. Superman/Godzilla: Sunrise (DC and Monsterverse crossover)

    Godzilla and the titans are now either being exterminated or captured by a military japanese company funded by Lex luthor, Bruce Wayne and an alien civilization interested in the Titans. As civil protests about the treatement of these creatures ensue, many wonder what superman thinks of all this and what he plans on doing about it.

    (The story would focus on a japanese billionare who is trying to control and militarise the titans while also renting them to an alien civilization to be used as weapons in their civil war. In exchange for knowledge on how to build anti titan mechs for the future that lex luthor is most interested in using. Bruce is pushed into this venture as he believes the titans are an out of control threat, whether its the ones who attempt to destroy humanity or fight for them. It is revealed clark has been harboring godzilla and tending to him after he was injured in a conflict with experimental anti titan mechs which puts him at odds with the japanese company who seeks to exterminate the titans and godzilla out of revenge for the loss of loved ones. It will be revealed that clark and godzilla share a kinship rooted in a skirmish between the two that happened many years ago. The story will feature mothra teaming up with wonder woman and a fight between batman in a anti titan mech against kong who has forged an armor from the same mineral the axe his ancient ancestors made to fight titans like godzilla).

    6. A comedic Johnny Bravo and Superman crossover adventure

    7. A sequel to Star crossed travellers with the justice league teaming up with autobots. Superman, Wonder Woman, Batman, Optimus Prime, Megatron and Windblade will be of focus with the decepticon Shockwave who seeks to destroy and recreate the universe as the primary antagonist. Galvatron will serve as secondary (drawing influence from idw that establishes Megatron and Galvatron as seperate characters)

    8. A 3way crossover with Superman teaming up with optimus prime and Godzilla against a threat.

    9. A Superman Cavewoman crossover with the titular protagonist Meriem Cooper being in a relationship with clark in his very young years before he and lois entered into a relationship and married.


    10. A alternate universe SupermanxLivewire fanfic

    What do you guys think?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dralokonda View Post

    5. Superman/Godzilla: Sunrise (DC and Monsterverse crossover)

    Godzilla and the titans are now either being exterminated or captured by a military japanese company funded by Lex luthor, Bruce Wayne and an alien civilization interested in the Titans. As civil protests about the treatement of these creatures ensue, many wonder what superman thinks of all this and what he plans on doing about it.

    (The story would focus on a japanese billionare who is trying to control and militarise the titans while also renting them to an alien civilization to be used as weapons in their civil war. In exchange for knowledge on how to build anti titan mechs for the future that lex luthor is most interested in using. Bruce is pushed into this venture as he believes the titans are an out of control threat, whether its the ones who attempt to destroy humanity or fight for them. It is revealed clark has been harboring godzilla and tending to him after he was injured in a conflict with experimental anti titan mechs which puts him at odds with the japanese company who seeks to exterminate the titans and godzilla out of revenge for the loss of loved ones. It will be revealed that clark and godzilla share a kinship rooted in a skirmish between the two that happened many years ago. The story will feature mothra teaming up with wonder woman and a fight between batman in a anti titan mech against kong who has forged an armor from the same mineral the axe his ancient ancestors made to fight titans like godzilla).

    What do you guys think?
    I'm a sucker for giant monsters, so I'd be most interested in your Superman vs Godzilla story

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    Thanks, what about the rest of my ideas

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dralokonda View Post
    Thanks, what about the rest of my ideas
    Superbro/Johnny Bravo seems like a hilarious premise for a one shot.

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    Yep, i'm even thinking of a scene where johnny is desperately searching for ingredients for his own personal hairspray because the factory that creates his usual is closing down. He runs amock across the universe searching for chemicals to make the right concoction, tossing whatever liquid substance he finds onto his hair just to keep it in perfect condition. Later, while superman is fighting darkseid, darkseid has a chance to finish clark with the omega effect, only for johnny to get in the way of the blast. However, because of all the chemicals his mixed together, his hair has become so indesctructible, it deflects the omega effect right back at darkseid much to his bewilderment.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dralokonda View Post
    Yep, i'm even thinking of a scene where johnny is desperately searching for ingredients for his own personal hairspray because the factory that creates his usual is closing down. He runs amock across the universe searching for chemicals to make the right concoction, tossing whatever liquid substance he finds onto his hair just to keep it in perfect condition. Later, while superman is fighting darkseid, darkseid has a chance to finish clark with the omega effect, only for johnny to get in the way of the blast. However, because of all the chemicals his mixed together, his hair has become so indesctructible, it deflects the omega effect right back at darkseid much to his bewilderment.
    Johnny: *Shrill, piercing feminine scream as Johnny trips and intercepts the blast.*

    Johnny: Whoa MAMA-- that rockfaced cat tried to smoke my 'do, man.

    Clark: He ain't nothin' but a hound dog, Johnny. Real devil in disguise, dig?"

    Darkseid: *comically covered in soot from his burns* I don't want to live in this Multiverse anymore.


    As always, I'm sorry. lol
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    Interesting ideas,
    here's what I got, kind of inspired by Donny Cates's Babyteeth.

    Superman: the Last Son of the Devil
    Basic idea is that Superman is not a Jesus Christ character but the Anti-Christ,
    the son of the Devil sent forth to Earth to conquer it since the Devil can't come to Earth.
    And somehow Clark grow up to be this superhero despite his heritage,
    and some lesser demons decide to become superheroes since that's what their savior is doing,
    while other demons believe Clark isn't doing his job right.

    And things got complicated when Heaven finds out about Clark,
    Angel Zod believe they should rain fire from sky and cleanse the Earth,
    but the other angels decide to send ​forth Supergirl as the Savior to try and stop the Anti-Christ.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dralokonda View Post

    5. Superman/Godzilla: Sunrise (DC and Monsterverse crossover)

    Godzilla and the titans are now either being exterminated or captured by a military japanese company funded by Lex luthor, Bruce Wayne and an alien civilization interested in the Titans. As civil protests about the treatement of these creatures ensue, many wonder what superman thinks of all this and what he plans on doing about it.

    (The story would focus on a japanese billionare who is trying to control and militarise the titans while also renting them to an alien civilization to be used as weapons in their civil war. In exchange for knowledge on how to build anti titan mechs for the future that lex luthor is most interested in using. Bruce is pushed into this venture as he believes the titans are an out of control threat, whether its the ones who attempt to destroy humanity or fight for them. It is revealed clark has been harboring godzilla and tending to him after he was injured in a conflict with experimental anti titan mechs which puts him at odds with the japanese company who seeks to exterminate the titans and godzilla out of revenge for the loss of loved ones. It will be revealed that clark and godzilla share a kinship rooted in a skirmish between the two that happened many years ago. The story will feature mothra teaming up with wonder woman and a fight between batman in a anti titan mech against kong who has forged an armor from the same mineral the axe his ancient ancestors made to fight titans like godzilla).
    This make me remember the Godzilla HISHE with the jealous Superman.
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    After about a month, my work is complete. I am not much of a writer, so this is in the format of 'fictional non-fiction'. An AI from Superman's Fortress, writes a book which could one day be a clue for the Legion of Superheroes to search out for their hero when he was a kid. This one is a deleted chapter, which is like an update of what Superman is up to in the 29th Century, 800 years from now.

    Thanks to Bored's encouragement, I put in more work then I initially expected. Superman's world is simply fascinating. Hopefully its enjoyable to read. I had a great time writing it.

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...it?usp=sharing

    Suggestions and comments are welcome.
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    Quote Originally Posted by manwhohaseverything View Post
    That's kinda my idea for superman.I would have kept Superman a notourious outlaw who fights for the little guy.Mine was basically inspired by samurai movies,westerns and one piece ofcourse which has the ultimate man of action.Note-man of action is what i believe clark should be at his core.A guy in jeans and tshirt.
    This was exactly my plan to begin with. But i find his world so fascinating, that even while sitting down to write this, my plan had changed to include the Fortress among other things. Personally, i think this seems to be a no-brainer. If one spends time on the internet, there's a number of video essays suggesting how Superman is a static character. If one could take this supposed weakness as a strength, the Western hero can also be called one. Now i haven't watched enough Westerns, but its often around a hero, who goes from town to town in a lawless world. He fights and moves to the next town, not changing much in terms of character.

    I find this surprising. Somebody should have done it by now. If you think about Superman stories set in the future, this is one place where it feels very very natural. Especially if you are a fan of the Golden Age, or the T-shirt Superman from Grant Morrison.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Super_kon View Post
    Years ago, I did a re-write of New Krypton. Where is was a full on War ala Civil War. Some differences:
    Sam Lane does a full Superhero Draft- commanders are Batman, Wonder Woman, J’onn.
    Kyle, Hal, and Guy Gardner choose to be field Commanders , while the Guardians assign Sodom Yat, kilowog, and Jon Stewart are assigned to protect New Krypton ( which Jon chooses as final redemption for Xanshi. (GL: New Krypton)
    Earth intercepts a list that Zod has of the most dangerous Earthlins in his opinion. They are : Tim Drake, Commander Luthor, Black Lightning, Jon Constantine, Zatanna, Cassandra Sandsmark( more to come on this selection),Booster Gold. Flash is assigned to protect them. ( Flash: New Krypton)
    Wonder Woman is sent to Recruit the Amazon’s. A spotlight is shown on her diplomatic skills and Amazon’s join Earth’s Army under Commander Troy.
    Nightwing is assigned to protect Martha Kent... Zod sends someone with codename flame bird (thora)to do the same . Both forces know that Martha’s safety is paramount. ( Nightwing and Flamebird )
    Kara joins her mother. Kon is drafted by Zod personally as his body guard code name Black Zero.
    Big Fights we see:
    John Stewart and Sodam Yat vs. Hal Jordan and Mon-el
    Kon vs. Kara
    Diana vs Faora
    Kara vs Alura
    Kal vs. bizarro
    Flash vs Kryptonian Assassins
    J’onn vs Zod
    Kal vs Mon
    Kal vs Zod

    Revelations and character progression:
    Faora does to protect Dick and Martha
    Kryptonians fear Amazon battle prowess
    Cassandra is on Zod’s list because she’s pregnant with the grandson of Zeus and Superman.
    Kon takes a sun dip after rebelling against Kryptonians. Overwrites his human half to make him fully Kryptonian.
    Kara leads Justice League.

    Clark/commander El keeps most of his story the same, however he is more emotionally conflicted, especially with Zod effectively holding Kon as a Hostage. He has a AI of Jonathan built that seems to conflict with the Jor-el AI throughout the series.Both of them hint at it’s His choice, and they are proud.
    Changes:Falls out with Kon and Kara. Lois comes to New krypton and surprisingly enjoys it until Hostilities take effect. Luthor uses Bizarro to initiate those Hostilities.

    Any fanfic that tries to give new krypton a better ending is fine by me

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    “Metropolis’s Crazy $#!+, with Jimmy Olsen!”

    The premise: A v-log (as in, like an actual YouTube short series looking to seem amateurish) kept by Jimmy as he enters adulthood and gets his first internship with the Daily Planet… section of WGBS’s website. He’s trying to get Perry to let him post it on the site, as he basically summarizes his two flatmates Clark and Lois’s discoveries, his own utterly insane and wacky adventures, and a huge does of rumors and gossip. Imagine as being like a spin-off of a work-com about the Daily Planet crossed with something like a cut down and more grungy Friends.

    The setting: Jimmy hosts the show in his and his friends shared apartment, a former university dorm with separate rooms, shared bathrooms, very little space, and which is only affordable to them because it got messed up by an incident between Superman and an alien (namely, there’s a giant “perma-stain” that they can’t quite cover up with a couch and that no-one can remove or hide.) The Metropolis of the story is an insane sci-fi wonderland/hellscape: there’s a weird combo of Brainiac-virus upgraded Earth technology, Apokiliptikan and New Genesis tech, Cadmus experiments, occasional alien refugees, time travel refugees, LexCorp Tech, and Star Labs stuff. It’s only sometimes organizers and under containment, so half the time, Jimmy or his friends have “stumbled” on something weird and we’re getting videos reviewing the aftermath/benefits/terrifying implications of that.

    The Cast: Primarily Jimmy’s friends, coworkers, and their associates -

    - Jimmy: A single child of a single mother who sadly passed away not long ago, the excitable, enthusiastic, and adventurous “host,” who became friends with Lois Lane because he’s the only Metropolis native she knows… and because Jimmy has friends in high places, low places, and side places; he’s her starting source for a lot of stuff, and he loves being in the center of all this craziness. He treats his friends like his new family, something a few of them are more aware of than others…

    - Lois: Former military brat, almost-military intelligence officer, and an unrelenting investigator with lethal deductive and interview skills, but a very rough writing style. Always has a knife on her, very practical and assertive when she wants to be, an absolute caffeine addict to an extent that terrifies everyone around her, and with a past as Lex’s ex-girlfriend. She also has an ostentatious and overbearing love of hair-metal, especially White Snake.

    - Clark: A minor celebrity journalist who’s popular blogs and editorials got him a job with the Planet, his writing style is engaging and delightful, but leans a bit too much towards “edutainment” like Chris Cilliza. He was paired with Lois as partners to try and help them both work out their style-problems as reporters. The most affectionately “sibling-like” of Jimmy’s friends, and also an old ex-friend of Lex, which formed his initial bond with Lois. Also, supposedly, he’s a shut-in who often works from home while Jimmy and Lois pound the pavement…

    - Everyone else: Lucy “Lawless” Lane (Lois’s sister, MMA fighter, Jimmy’s secret FWB/girlfriend), Steve Lombard (reimagined to be more of a Pat McAfee-type and less of a jerk, but more of a comedian), Ron Troupe (Lois’s mentor and Lucy’s ex, thus the reason for Lois hating it when her sister dates her friends), Cat Grant (Lois’s “best frenemy” she actually loves to hang out with), Lana Lang (Clark’s ex and WGBS celebrity anchor who has a real rivalry with Lois that Cat pokes fun at), Lex Luthor (barely glimpsed, often talker about.)

    What usually goes down: Jimmy records his adventures with occasional drop on by his friends, they speculated about what caused what weird thing happened, analyze how it plays into the debut of the Superman character Metropolis has gained, and Jimmy usually has some minor/major subplot involving him getting too close to the action - for instance, he sometimes records videos with the old Silver Age mutations and powers that would infamously show up, and have to explain why he’s briefly a 20 foot tall turtle-man, for instance. Their personal lives also supply humor and drama on the side from the minor (Lombard teasing KU-fan Clark about the Jayhawks in March Madness), to the not-so-minor (Lucy hiding from Lois because she stayed with Jimmy, and Lois has been called by Major Lane to find Lucy) to the major (Lena Luthor, Lex’s daughter, has run away and showed up at Lois’s apartment and been discovered by a caring Clark.)

    Important subplots and story arcs: Jimmy becoming aware that Lois and Clark like each other and trying to play match-maker to hilarious results, Lana becomes aware Jimmy’s v-log could expose Clark’s secret and trying to hide that without being discovered, Clark getting infected with Red Kryptonite and having to control a “reaction” for multiple episodes, Mxyzptlk inserting himself as the show’s co-host, investigation into Cadmus and LexCorp, etc.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Soubhagya View Post
    After about a month, my work is complete. I am not much of a writer, so this is in the format of 'fictional non-fiction'. An AI from Superman's Fortress, writes a book which could one day be a clue for the Legion of Superheroes to search out for their hero when he was a kid. This one is a deleted chapter, which is like an update of what Superman is up to in the 29th Century, 800 years from now.

    Thanks to Bored's encouragement, I put in more work then I initially expected. Superman's world is simply fascinating. Hopefully its enjoyable to read. I had a great time writing it.

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...it?usp=sharing

    Suggestions and comments are welcome.
    I really enjoyed that. A very heady hard sci-fi approach towards the Superman mythos. My biggest suggestion would be to break it up a little more into more digestible chapters, so that readers can more easily take a break between each section, as all the science is a lot to take in all at once. It might be better delivered in smaller chunks.

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