I feel terrible for the guy. Thing is, I'm not really into dark eroticism so I probably wouldn't have followed the title even if it were better known.
I feel terrible for the guy. Thing is, I'm not really into dark eroticism so I probably wouldn't have followed the title even if it were better known.
Would you prefer i use words like stiff? Rigid? Are we really comparing this to Alex Ross now?
As I said originally, the work doesn't visually tell a story in an interesting way. There is potential in it, but the layouts and need serious improvements to compete on the monthly sales shelf it's being released against.
Considering that I find Alex Ross's art to bevery boring indeed, sure, seems fair.
What word you should use depends on what you're trying to express, which seems to be boredom, so "boring" seems fine. But it being boring has no bearing on it being dynamic or static.
Unrefined then, perhaps?As I said originally, the work doesn't visually tell a story in an interesting way There is potential in it, but the layouts and need serious improvements to compete on the monthly sales shelf it's being released against.
Aren't there monthlies that look a lot worse than this that sell more? I don't think the art is the problem.
I'll go with that. But I'm just going in circles here. I've said my piece for better or worse, I don't see any reason to keep this up. I hope that Larime reads my criticism for what it is. I don't mean to be overly negative, I am trying to be constructively critical. I want everyone to be successful at making comics, and there is a market out there for everything. This isn't for me, obviously, but you can't win 'em all. I wish you all the best of luck and prosperity, and I hope you find your niche out there in the comics market, Larime.
Shows like Lost Girl, You're the worst, and Game of thrones aren't erotica either. Doesn't mean they aren't packed with eroticism, which isn't my bag. A book about a murderous young woman whose friends keep getting their sexuality exploited, featuring a serial killer who only targets attractive women checks enough marks on my qualifier. Just not into that stuff.