I'll say this right off the bat, they hit a very good stride for John's character. Reserved, but not emotionless. They give him pretty believable reactions and his character maintains a throughline, losing his disillusionment by the end (highlighted best by his disrespecting and later appreciating the GL Oath). Green Arrow was pretty great in this, and if you're sore over Strange Adventures, this was basically a big "**** you" to that book with respect to Adam Strange.
More importantly, John's intelligent but not an instant savant with the ring. Most his initial constructs are clear reactions, he doesn't have control on the ring initially and we get transition scenes of him practicing-- something you want to see a rookie do. It's very well-set up, and John never has a moment you think he's in any way unworthy. He's simply learning to use his ring and grows better with it as the film progresses, though as I'll mention later, he basically goes from "first day on the job" to "greatest ever" over the course of one pep talk, which was a huge let down. They pepper the film with his PTSD, which is highly effective, so you hope it will culminate in using his experiences and trauma to overcome the threat. Instead, well, he does that thing Flash and GL stories do when they don't know how to resolve the plot: they just dig deep and find more speed/will and blow up the bad guy because we've only got 5 minutes left of budget.
Ollie is used pretty well too. He's good at what he does, it's just not very effective in space. He feels in over his head and along mostly as the experienced superhero who wants to find out what happened to his friend, but heavy lifting he does not do and that's very much appreciated. This isn't his story one bit, and he never really upstages John. He's support, which is all he should be.
The creators continue to get more comfortable with the art style, and those lamenting John's costume rejoice-- the movie notes they can adjust the costumes at will, so presumably we'll see him change costumes in the future.
Speaking of designs, this may be my favorite ever for Vixen. She looks phenomenal for the minute she's in this. Anyone hoping to see a Justice League formation movie, tough luck. They're fully formed and Diana's already on it, so no WW origin either.
In all honesty, the first two acts work pretty well, John getting Kyle/Hal's fused origin aside. But then there's the third act.
Here's the thing. Sinestro and Hal should have been one character named Sinestro and Adam should have just been Hal. This isn't just my sour grapes over Hal getting the villain edit, but it generally doesn't serve much purpose making this Hal other than, well, to **** on him. He's just there as "the former greatest," which is also Sinestro... But Sinestro is instead just some up-jumped stooge who doesn't seem to remember anything about how rings work. He casually sets up his own death very clumsily. It makes Sinestro look bad, and it makes Hal look bad. It doesn't make John look good beating Sinestro when he's so goddamn stupid he basically kills himself. It robs John of that victory, much like Hal turning into a God with 12 rings and a space demon losing to what's essentially a GL with a pep talk. It doesn't make John look strong so much as Hal look like a bitch. It's just bad writing where they don't know how else to resolve the plot so they just hide in the vague space where willpower/speedforce Eifel Tower the idea of an earned conclusion and we're all sorer for it.
Hal gets corrupted by Parallax and Sinestro immediately simps for him, which doesn't really sound like Sinestro either. What's worse is they don't even use Hal's Parallax armor. It's just lazy green space hobo with power lines for emphasis and a target for Ollie to later shoot. Hal is elevated to godhood, wielding 12 power rings and Parallax to boot... which John matches with simply one ring and some gumption because we need to wrap this **** up. Then Ollie shoots Hal in the back from in front of him. I'm not kidding. The arrow comes through his chest from behind, and he falls on top of John who was in front of Ollie, but Ollie is facing them from their front. Boomerang arrow, I guess?
Then Hal dies, doubles down on being a dickhead, and Adam Strange saves the day, and suddenly Shayera (who has shown nothing but general hostility or mild indifference to everyone all movie) is a big fan of John's and hopes to see him again as he and Green Arrow become friends.
I'm not bringing this up because of Hal's heel turn so much as the movie is pretty careful for the first two acts to not try and set up John as the chosen one who will get a massive power boost at the 11th hour and then exactly does that before trying to just leave the board with all the pieces fans want to see but it didn't really earn. There's no Hawkman, which is good. He's not necessary, but there's also no real scene to set up any tension or even friendship between John and Shayera. Ollie and John do a lot of bonding over the film, so I'll say that's a very well-earned friendship by the end. Shayera? Not really.
Shayera herself is something of a non-character. She's just a Thanagarian, no more or less, and has no development other than being able to admit that someone from the other side killing himself to save her planet was brave. And that she hopes to see John again, which is out of left field for anyone not shipping them from JL/JLU. She and Adam are there primarily to be mouthpieces for Rann/Thanagar, but Adam gets to be a hero on his own right. Shayera never becomes more than a soldier with no distinction.
Honestly, the real ship in this movie is Ollie/John. There's genuine friendship formed by the end. I really enjoyed them over the course of it.
Likewise, Sardath, Alanna, Hal, Sinestro, Kyle and pretty much the entire GLC kind of get the shaft-- and most of it in that third act.
If your name isn't Oliver Queen or Adam Strange, honestly, you're in this movie to make John Stewart look good. Nobody else really gets to do anything valuable, and Shayera herself is just there to placate people who want to see her on screen with John, but not actually share any chemistry or bond in any significant way.
I wanted to love this movie, but if you just let Hal die in the second act or have him take Adam's place with Sinestro being the big bad, it's overall tighter and generally doesn't make it seem like a layup to make John look good at their expense. This feels a lot like the Gotham by Gaslight adaption in which they needed a heel turn to make it stick... And nobody ends up looking good because of it. Not Jim Gordon. Not Sinestro and not Hal Jordan. John does, but not as a result of his wins so much as his character earlier in the movie. Every time something goes wrong, he stops and thinks about how to move ahead. He observes. He learns. He keeps a cool head. He's very likable. It's just a shame that it gets undone to just hand him the win because he remembered he needs to believe in himself and apparently that's enough to use his single half-empty power ring to overpower the de facto greatest GL on super steroids. They set up Hal so much that John suddenly going from rookie to space messiah is kind of hilarious.
This was everything I would have wanted for John for two acts. Kill Hal, let him just be an ideal to surpass, and be done with it. Instead, he shows up to be an ******* and job pretty poorly and the film rushes to a pretty hasty conclusion that's a shame because the setup is generally quite strong for these movies.
There's a hilarious bit where Hal goes super saiyan, though. I really enjoyed that for how silly it was. His 70s cop hair goes full glowing yellow and everything.
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