Yeah, even if I did enjoy those two backup issues during the FS months, the actual series surprised me, I wasn't expecting to like it this much. And indeed, Jason has been great here so far. I like his overall attitude and his standing in this dystopian Gotham. Really cool premise and position within the Batfamily and the city as a whole.
Different strokes, but I totally see what you mean: at times there's a lack of... polish.
It's deliberate I think, but I feel it's not quite working sometimes, because, once more, I think the artist is quite great.
But yeah, I generally like how stylized and almost old school manga-ish characters can look. Also, fuck it, I like white streak Jason, be it silly/unnecesary or not, and I think it works quite well here (and I guess it can be chalked up to aging):
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