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Zagre
My TL went ballistic posting spoilers for this so I caved in and grabbed the issues instead of getting the trade. All in all, given how vitrolic some reactions were, I have to say I enjoyed this more than I thought I would. I read it all in one go so I can't speak for whoever followed this monthly, but I thought it has a decent mystery going for it as its central narrative, really liked the general tone of not knowing who's a friend and who's the enemy (though it seems that has ended now), the characters were fun to read in general and it balances some lighthearted affair, some very dark comedy and some actual bleakness pretty well, which is easier said than done.
Batman basically plays the Ned Stark role, in the sense that he's the character you think you'll follow along but every moment that passes you see he's unprepared to deal with the situation. I actually enjoyed Bruce in this, he seemed a bit more humane and fallible though of course, it only really works because the story actually makes him pay for his mistakes instead of letting him get away scott-free like almost always (in fact, I would argue the story wouldn't work if he didn't end how he ended). Green Arrow was pretty awesome and I really liked his scene with Hal in the end. The character's voices in general felt pretty spot on, which is always welcomed.
The highlight for me though, were the villains. I don't know if it's because I'm soured of alternate universes were every villanous version of a hero is angry all the time, but I actually enjoyed these vampire versions and I liked that they were allowed to be mostly themselves, only, you know, minus the murdering tendencies and being in general colossal dicks. It's little details like Hal having a sincere conversation with Barry or Diana actually trying to talk to the people she was to convince as a friend instead of, I don't know, just come in sword in hand and try to ram it through their chests like a barbarian that made them feel a bit more in character, which is necessary from a reconizability POV given how brutal they can get when they show their true faces.
Reading it in one go, the reveal worked for me. It's wonky when it comes to lore, but it works in terms of character and general behaviour (you can go back and see that character being worried when Bruce discovered the conspiracy and being the only one that actually complained about having to kill the vampires) without being too obvious (and with some red herrings thrown in for good measure).
The book is flawed though. It juggles god-knows how many characters, each one with their own little interests and mini-narratives in different locations and struggles to give everyone or every moment their due, with the story feeling rushed in places. Wonder Woman's turning is probably its weakest moment with the plot pulling a "uno reverse card" to turn her in one page. It's not dramatic or well-thought at all, and it's not character-based, unlike some of the other reveals and switcheroos the story manages much more sucessfully.
Also, they really needed to explain their lore. Like I can get what the writers are going for most of the time, but with vampires and superheroes both having their own set of arbitrary rules that change from story to story, you should state what your rules are clearly, even if it's something as simple as saying "metahuman powers can potentially counter any vampire weakness, so you better watch out". They kind of infer that with Hal's ring blocking sunlight in the very beginning, but they do so in such an ambiguous way that it becomes obtuse, you shouldn't have to be deciphering how the world works while you're reading it.
Which is frustrating because the fact that the story works, structurally, in spite of this means (to me) that most of these flaws could have been easily corrected. I actually thought this story (and I say story because most of the narrative threads and emotional beats have been closed-off, what comes next will feel more like a sequel than a continuation) perhaps could have used another issue in the middle to overall explain things, set up others properly and in general give a bit more pages to the moments it rushed to balance the frantic feel those moments can give.
All in all, the positives outweight the negatives. I don't know if I'll be back for Part 2 (I'll probably wait and see, like I did in here) but I have liked this more than the other two Elseworld stories I was actually buying month-to-month, ironically enough. I also enjoyed this more than Dceased (which I think shares some of its flaws though, I thought the story here was overall stronger despite its shortcomings).