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    Quote Originally Posted by Jackalope89 View Post
    Is an image required?
    Not really. If you can't or don't want to provide an image, then add some additional descriptive information:

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    Name: Callisto Therianthlot




    Age: 28

    Height: 6'4" ( a Skinwalker's adult height is determined by the animal spirit they are born with)

    weight: 254 pounds

    Sex: Female

    Body type: Strongfat ( what animal spirit a skinwalker is born with determines what body type they have.)

    Hair: White

    eyes: blue

    skin color: Brown

    Features: bear ears ( fur color white) Skinwalkers are born with animal-type ears. These ears indicted what animal spirit a skinwalker was born with.

    Species: Skinwalker

    The Daughter of Chosen Knight Lycaon Therianthlot. Callisto looked up to her father and wanted to follow in his footsteps. Born in a Kingdom of Skinwalkers.

    As a shapeshifter / Skinwalker, Callisto was born with an animal spirit. She was born with a bear spirit and her father was born with a wolf spirit. However, she didn't unlock her shapeshift until she was fourteen.

    At that age, she became her father's apprentice. She joined her father in his many battles and journeys. Throughout their journeys Callisto was convinced that her father was unbeatable in combat.

    However, one day she and her father encountered a mysterious stranger in black armor with Dragon-like wings on a cliff to a temple. She and her father fought this mysterious stranger. During the battle Callisto was no match for the Mysterious stranger but, her father was equal to him.

    When the stranger was about to kill her. Her father pushed her out of the way, and off the cliff. As she was falling Callisto watched the life go out of her father's eyes.

    When she awoke after falling into a river. Callisto made a vow to herself to continue her father's legacy and also avenge him. Callisto knew that as she was now she was no match for the stranger who killed her father. So she starts out on her own adventure to get stronger.

    Powers and Abilities

    Animal Morphing / Bear Morphing: With her bear spirit Callisto can morph into an anthropomorphic bear gaining the physical attributes of a bear.

    Bear form

    Height: 9'6" feet

    Weight: 862.6 lbs

    Fur: White

    Kingdom: Diadasosbiosis

    Beast combat: Callisto knows a style among shapeshifters / Skinwalkers known as Beast style. Since her animal spirit is a bear. Her beast combat training is tailored to powerful strikes and grappling.

    Note: One thing Callisto is glad for is that she was born with an animal spirit that is suitable for knighthood. There are skinwalkers that aren't suitable to be knights due to the animal spirits they are born with.
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    It's a good bio, only her weight. Bruce, I hate to ask but could you please change it from 454 to 254?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Tami View Post
    Not really. If you can't or don't want to provide an image, then add some additional descriptive information:

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    Okay, sounds good.



    Gender- Male
    Age- 75
    Height- 4 feet 6 inches.
    Weight- 247lbs.
    Appearance- Stout, but heavily muscular dwarf, typical of a frontline Dwarven Warrior. red hair and bushy beard that drapes over an ever more prominent beer belly. But has not (yet) affected his combat readiness. His armor and weaponry, being Dwarven made, are top quality.
    Species- Dwarf
    Bio- Formerly of the Dwarven Rifle Brigade, Rogden Granitecrush left to become a mercenary when he learned he could earn more money that way. Though being away from the mountains has bothered him from time to time, particularly in areas with no mountains or hills in sight, he's adapted well enough. Though proficient as a mercenary, he does have a bad habit of causing unnecessary damage at times. Especially when using Dwarven Gun Works, he sometimes overloads his main weapon and blows a hole through walls. And not always in the "on purpose" sense. Still, his reputation for getting the job done (if messily, at times) has worked to his favor.

    His main weapon, a Dwarven Rifle, has a slow reload rate, but its effectiveness at piercing armor and the loud boom at least startling nearby people/animals/monsters, has proven invaluable. And though a crossbow could reload faster, with proper aim, he can snipe foes from quite a distance. And though he holds no more ties to his old home, he refuses to let would be copiers take a closer look at it. Along with the rifle, he wears heavy plate armor, a tower shield (for a Dwarf), a short dagger, and a one-handed sword should it come to close combat. He can also rush the enemy by picking up the tower shield, and charging the ranks. Its gotten him (and those that follow, for whatever reason) in trouble before, though.

    Though shorter than most foes, that has never deterred a dwarf before, let alone Rogden.

    While gifted with strength and durability, he has no aptitude for magic. Of any kind. So, like most Dwarves, he relies on his strong armor, shield, and luck to avoid most magical damage. And has a bad habit of drinking before battle. During battle, he can fire off at least two to three rounds before foes get too close. And then he becomes a tank.
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    Change the weight because there's no indication that she has greater than human density in her base form. the point of Strongfat is a person with this body type should look like their fat but you should still be able to tell have a lot of muscle under their fat. at a human density, 454 pounds would likely make her have a too large muscle to fat ratio.

    Meaning she would have a lot more fat than she would have muscle and that would just have made her look obese.
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    Quote Originally Posted by bruceleegreyhulk View Post
    Change the weight because there's no indication that she has greater than human density in her base form. the point of Strongfat is a person with this body type should look like their fat but you should still be able to tell have a lot of muscle under their fat. at a human density, 454 pounds would likely make her have a too large muscle to fat ratio.

    Meaning she would have a lot more fat than she would have muscle and that would just have made her look obese.
    That's what I was kinda thinking. Usually knights (or soon to be knights) are not obese. They can be big, but it should be more muscle than fat.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jackalope89 View Post
    Okay, sounds good.



    Gender- Male
    Age- 75
    Height- 4 feet 6 inches.
    Weight- 247lbs.
    Appearance- Stout, but heavily muscular dwarf, typical of a frontline Dwarven Warrior. red hair and bushy beard that drapes over an ever more prominent beer belly. But has not (yet) affected his combat readiness. His armor and weaponry, being Dwarven made, are top quality.
    Species- Dwarf
    Bio- Formerly of the Dwarven Rifle Brigade, Rogden Granitecrush left to become a mercenary when he learned he could earn more money that way. Though being away from the mountains has bothered him from time to time, particularly in areas with no mountains or hills in sight, he's adapted well enough. Though proficient as a mercenary, he does have a bad habit of causing unnecessary damage at times. Especially when using Dwarven Gun Works, he sometimes overloads his main weapon and blows a hole through walls. And not always in the "on purpose" sense. Still, his reputation for getting the job done (if messily, at times) has worked to his favor.

    His main weapon, a Dwarven Rifle, has a slow reload rate, but its effectiveness as piercing armor and the loud boom at least startling nearby people/animals/monsters, has proven invaluable. And though he holds no more ties to his old home, he refuses to let would be copiers take a closer look at it. Along with the rifle, he wears heavy plate armor, a tower shield (for a Dwarf), a short dagger, and a one-handed sword should it come to close combat. He can also rush the enemy by picking up the tower shield, and charging the ranks. Its gotten him (and those that follow, for whatever reason) in trouble before, though.

    While gifted with strength and durability, he has no aptitude for magic. Of any kind. So, like most Dwarves, he relies on his strong armor, shield, and luck to avoid most magical damage. And has a bad habit of drinking before battle.
    Nice bio, looks good.
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    I did one final adjustment to the Bio and is mentioning that a Skinwalker's adult height is determined by the animal spirit they are born with.
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    Name: Thokla
    Age: 33
    Height: 6'6
    Weight: 216 lbs
    Species: Orc
    Bio: Lo, from the lands of the orcs came the chosen warrior Gnash. He was a powerful warrior carved out of solid muscle who could fell multiple men with a single swing of his ax. He was believed to be unkillable, a grim reaper that brought death whenever he stepped onto the battlefield. He also had a bad habit of accepting any challenge given to him, which resulted in his death in a drinking contest.

    Fortunately, he had a sister by the name of Thokla. And since they needed someone to replace him, they got her to do it. Though not exactly enthused about the entire 'chosen one' thing being pushed on her, Thokla was willing to go along with the nonsense in the name of her late brother.

    Powers and Abilities:
    Orcish Strength: Due to her Orcish heritage, Thokla has strength far greater than a normal human. She could, if she so desired, pop a human's head with one hand like a grape, and lift several tons and hold it for an extended period of time.

    Axe Combat: Thokla is skilled in using a double-headed battleax she calls "Helmsplitter" in combat.
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    Gender: Male
    Name: Fei Ying
    Age: 22
    Height/Weight 5'6
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    Species: Human

    Bio: TBA

    Personality: He is a conniving, greedy, dishonest little prick with a nasty streak that rears its head whenever he feels crossed or insulted. Also isn't above using underhanded tricks to get what he wants and is a budding pyromaniac. But, Fei is loyal to his family and can prove to be a great ally to the few he chooses to call friends. (Work in progress)
    Equipment:

    Fireproof Cloth Armor: A family heirloom passed down from his father; A suite created from Dragon's skin allows Fei to withstand high temperatures of almost 1000 degrees Fahrenheit. It also allows for easy movement due to its lightweight. However, it trades speed for defense as any sharp blade can puncture the protective gear with relative ease.

    Dragon's Breath Fire Bombs: While Fei has no training with any weapon per se, he is skilled with his homemade firebombs. They were created by tweaking his family's firework formula to give them an added "kick" with one alone \ hot enough to quickly reduce a horse-drawn carriage into ash in seconds. At any time, he has no less than five on him and can easily make more with his "firework" making equipment he carries with him. But, this leaves him open to attack as he needs time to make more, usually around a few minutes (Two turns)

    Firework Making Equipment: Kept in a wooden box he carries with him, the lacquered box contained numerous fuses, gunpowder, shells, flint, and measuring equipment to help keep him in stock of his bombs. With it on, he is all but a sitting target as he really can't move all that fast when carrying it.

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    Seeing some good work. I'll make comments this weekend, so feel free to tweak your character bios as you like.
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    Here is a list of some possible names for the various Kingdoms. Feel free to choose one for your character, or if you have a different idea let me know.

    Wis
    Fan
    Sel
    Bore
    Con
    Tee
    Fre
    Serf
    Mo
    Dia
    Ba
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    Choose Dia and add the Greek Suffix biosis
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    None of them really worked for me, so I went with Bosedium for the Dwarven Kingdom. Pronounced "Boe say dium".

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