Digimon in Comic Form!

[JungleBatman]

I've been writing a Digimon story that could probably work in a comic form, Here's the premise:

The world has a class system that everyone gets placed into on their first year of High School, (I'm British so expect British terms) Great, Good, Average and Poor, the characers are a group of new poor class people whom discover a portal to the digital world and they end up having to fight against the terrifying force of the Chess Army "led" by KingChessmon and his bodyguard AxeKnightmon.

Characters: Each character is partnered to a member of the Royal Knights and they are as follows;
Keith is Partnered to Alphamon, now reborn as Raptormon, he has no idea who his parents were and he was raised in an orphanage, he tends to keep himself to himself and he has to keep Raptormon in line.

Tobias is Partnered to Craniamon, now reborn as Gearmon, he has tourettes and a slight anger problem, both him and Gearmon who has a very philosopher-esque personality do not get along at all.

Natalie is Partnered to Crusadermon, now reborn as Kendomon, she has Downs Syndrome, the relationship between her and her family is mixed, her sister cares a lot about her and the two get along great, whilst her father is the president of a major company and her mother is utterly embarrased about her looks, saying at one point "Our reputation can at least survive this situation we are in now thanks to you." Both Kendomon and Nat get along fine.

Fred is Partnered to Dynastmon, now reborn as Frostlemon, his past is similar to Thomas from Data Squad with dead mother and uncaring grandmother and weak father but the Stpemother is alive and he gets along okay with his half brothers and especially his baby half sister. Frostlemon has a deadpan but friendly personality.

Barry is Partnered to Examon, now reborn into a blue and green Dracomon, his father left him 3 years ago and he has becom the man of the house, blue Dracomon is laid back whilst blue Dracomon is more aggressive.

Patrick is partnered to Gallantmon, now reborn into Guilmon, Pat has Autism and a severe lack of confidence, not helping matters is the fact that his family are stuck in a house with most of his family making a lot of noises around causing him to have a lot of panic attacks. Guilmon is very protective of Guilmon and the two of them get along the best.

Paul is Partnered to Pyramicmon, now reborn as Impmon, Paul is extremely protective over Ian since their families have known each other for years, in fact Paul deliberately failed his placement tests since he knew that Ian was going to fail to make sure that he was safe, whilst Impmon is a prankster, he only pranks those deserve it and he gets along great with Ian's partner Digimon.

Ian is partnered to Justicemon, now reborn as Ruffmon, before the events of the story Ian was fighting cancer and immediately after he beat cancer, he had to take the tests. He relys on Paul for everything and he is still very weak from chemo. Ruffmon is a very playful Digimon but during battle he can get very fierce.

Darren is partnered to Kentaurosmon, now reborn as Kudamon, Darren has Dwarfism and he is more of a peaceful person who hates this class system the most as his family has mostly been ruined by the system itself, with his older brothers being thugs for criminal gangs and his family is about to shatter, Kudamon is aso very peaceful and friendly and consistently disguises himself as a neck pillow.

Catherine is partnered to Leopardmon, now reborn as Elecmon, Darren has Cereberal palsy and limited movement in her right hand, her family dotes on her a lot but in spite of this she has a very friendly and cheeky personality. Elecmon is basically a scaredy cat like Digimon, whom hides behind Catherine's leg a lot.

Michael is partnered to Magnamon, now reborn as Veemon, Mikey has ADHD and whilst being the most easily distracted, he is also the craftiest since Veemon can only digivolve by Digi-Eggs. Veemon is very silly and goofy and they get along like butter to bread.

Steven is partnered to Omnimon, now reborn as Agumon and Gabumon, Steve is very protective of his fellow studens as his family has a lot of problems, namely the fact that his parents both have to work a lot leaving Steven to look after his younger siblings, his parentshate this but they can't figure out how to hep him out for now. Steen tends to unfortunately ignore his Partners by fussin over the rest.

Aaron is partnered to UltraForceVeedramon, now reborn as Veemon, Aaron is built like a footbball player has a slight learning disability and tends to not realise at times that he is a lot stronger than he thinks he is. Veemon is more stoic than Mikey's but he gets along well with Aaron.

As you can see there are a lot of characters but I feel that this could work, if you want to read the story, you can view it here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1418647...ustice-For-All

Any Suggestions for extra ideas or improvements are needed

[JungleBatman]

If you want to know, you can view the story here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1418647...ustice-For-All
and here: https://archiveofourown.org/works/45...ters/114173062