Decent first issue. Dorn’s dialogue is surprisingly good considering he’s not a regular comic book writer. It’s not clunky or too over the top.
The issue establishes JHI’s current status and sets up a villain. So that aspect of an issue #1 was accomplished. Though I think something bigger should have happened as an attention getter.
I like the idea of showing what happened when John made the moral stand and left the military industrial complex. It’s an interesting take showing that even though he did the right thing it still negatively effected some people’s lives.
I was a little confused as to what happened to Mr. Kerry. Did he phase through the wall when Stax threw him?