Yes, the Rose/Thorn motherhood and the Molly Mayne relationship need some tweaking. Roy Thomas' handling of the Rose marriage and the missing twins was a mess and frankly needs a rewrite. Molly went from a groupie to an eventual lover. It was the Golden Age! Why couldn't a woman think she could convert a man to heterosexuality? Molly and Alan could easily have a relationship much like what was thought for Katharine Hepburn and Spencer Tracy.
In the words of Capt. Liam Shaw from the third season of Picard...
That is a valid criticism of the book which I mentioned myself a few pages back. Between that particular plot point being lifted verbatim from another book and the GeoffJohnsian (Hey, Major Hoy, can we start using this word?) tendency to overlay current characters and concepts onto a Golden Age time frame, there are certainly reasons to discuss the book that don't revolve around Alan liking men.That leads me to First Officer Hansen. More accurately, Seven of Nine. Hell, I'm a relic of an older time. By the book. By God, the book is boring... Hansen is reckless. She's unrelenting, doesn't give a damn about protocol or procedure. However... she is brave... and loyal, and... the book that she writes is gonna be great. And the rules that she breaks... maybe they were broken to begin with. So, in light of that, I have a recommendation: promotion to Captain when we return to port.