Artifacts #12 page 4 panel 6:
from the script:
PANEL 6: We end the scene with Tom and Tilly both unconscious, Tom now back in his human form. Obviously there are a few destroyed Aphs -- and pieces thereof -- scattered around the clearing. The Aph who shot Tom announces, "The Survivor wants both of them..."
from the final issue:
As you see, no Aph and no speechbubble.
(hope it's ok that Iam using this Panel)
I tend to follow the script, but it's a bit difficult for the composition not to know how much dialogue a panel needs.
Example:
Artifacts #12 page 3 Panel 3:
Concentrate on Tom. The Rapture is starting to glow as Tom goes into "transformstion" mode, starting to turn to brimstone form.
Tom mutters something cool that I haven't thought of yet.
To what Ron Marz said maybe this is not the finished version of the script.
A good storytelling is a good balance between medium-, wideshots and closeups. Having some Text or not having some text or diappearing characters can change everything for me.