COMIC ART-Asking for opinions

[Iris]

Hello,I'm new to CBR forum and I draw comics.Ι would like some opoinions for a comic I recently finished with my sister.We haven't make any studies on comic drawing so I would like to learn my mistakes on color,shetch and shadow level.If someone cares to see more he/she could say it.
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[ExcelsiorPrime]

I love the page layout and the color. I wish the borders that separate the panels were a bit better defined. The space between panels I believe are called gutters.

here is an example. Please share more...we learn by doing. And Dream by dreaming.

[Iris]

Thank you for your comments,they were very nice. Do you have any idea how can I fix that problem in photoshop or with any other program or with hand?

[Iris]

Here is the first issue from the same comic.Please share your opinions .Thank you.