Originally Posted by
godisawesome
That kid certainly seems to have all the components ready made; he feels like he could be immediately cast by somebody in a superhero production as a Robin (DCEU films, Supergirl show as a guest star, whatever) , and given a director who can give him some cues to tweak his performance just a little bit more. I enjoyed him letting his opponents throw him around; I think a good character tic to build on that would be showcasing a few moments where Tim would get a little worried or act overjoyed that he landed as many hits as he did. Just enhance his dorkiness a little bit to contrast with how good he is.
I know you guys have moved past this a bit, but your discussion made me think a bit today about how that sequence could have been tweaked to be a bit better, which is something I do with BvS sometimes, even though I actually like the movie quite a bit.
You're right that having just the name Martha break Bruce down is a bit weak, but allow me to repaint that scene a bit, including its context. First off, I'd enhance the theme of Batman having recently fallen; have Clark investigate him for the paper and determine Batman's career, explicitly revealing to the audience that he stumbled into dangerous moral territory after the second Robin's death, maybe even have Clark find out that Bruce is also estranged from Dick because of his increased lethality. Clark can express admiration over Batman's early career, and have that contrasted with his distaste for what Batman's becoming; thus, his ultimatum is granted to Batman in part because he was a good person, and Clark is struggling with the question of whether or not it's possible to stay "good in this world."
Second, have Bruce be aware of Superman's identity as Clark, though have his actions make it clear that he regards it as a cover story instead of as the real man. And make it clear that he doesn't decide to kill Superman until after the Senate bombing, so we can see how he thinks he's being objective while actually not being that at all. Also, maybe take the machine guns off the Batmobile but keep the rest of his lethal tactics; there should be something specifically poisonous about him crafting a purpose built weapon in the kryptonite staff.
Finally, in the final fight, speed up the pace of Batman's attacks and increase the number as well, so that Superman can keep trying to talk to him while being electrocuted, hit with artillery, and sonic charges. He still tosses Bruce around, but it's in reaction to Bruce continuing to waste his time, and is still holding back-- then when the kryptonite gas hits him, he can't talk. Make the fist fight more desperate; again, speed up the pace and have Superman keep trying to communicate. Finally, when Superman is down and Batman grabs the spear, Superman starts to get his voice back, while we notice that Bruce is starting to hesitate about his spear. Clark finally gives his full explanation, Bruce tells him to shut up, trying to will himself to stab Superman, Clark then starts begging that Bruce at least save his mother, Bruce yells Shut Up!, then Superman finally says her name then, and that finally makes Batman start to talk back to Superman, trying to make him confess that Martha isn't his mother, but Superman just keeps on begging, and it's clear that Bruce is losing his will to kill at the sincerity.
Then have Lois be the one who flat out calls him on his $#!+, explain its Luthor's fault, corroborates Clark's story, and Batman becomes fully ashamed of what he did, so it's very clear that he feels immense guilt over Superman dying in the Doomsday fight, and has to reevaluate his recent lethality.