Hey guys, I recently took some time and finally wrote something and it was every bit as fun as I had hoped. I'm always looking for pointers, so I would greatly appreciate anyone who would read/comment on my story. The story is a comedic take on what would happen if you were to have to change your superhero name for various reasons, and was just a thought I had after thinking about how many times Shazam has changed his name. It includes many comic references and I feel like this would be the best place to get some comments on it, or at least to brighten up somebody's day. I appreciate everything!
Link to the story is here: http://www.wattpad.com/myworks/38230335/write/123425944
Thanks again!