lol, awesome qc'ing at work here. Editorial, there's not much to hellion. bad attitude (has been supplanted by Quire as resident bad boy, as yawn-inducing a standard issue trope as there ever was) and severed hands. That's it. If you can't catch those two bits of overriding salience about this little stain of wallpaper worthlessness, then why bother including? Or even professing to edit the book in the first place?