"Phineas Gage was an American railroad construction foreman remembered for his improbable survival of an accident in which a large iron rod was driven completely through his head, destroying much of his brain's frontal lobe, and for that injury's reported effects on his personality and behavior over the remaining 12 years of his life..."
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I'll be honest: I couldn't avoid spoilers and speculation. While the specifics were mostly unknown to me, I went into this issue knowing that Ben was going to become Chasm. I saw the costume. I assumed this meant he wouldn't be getting his memories back, as well.
But I was determined to give this issue a fair shot -- to try to judge it on its own merits. And I'll say this, as well: studying literary analysis helped me to differentiation between liking something and appreciating something. By that, I mean -- even if there are aspects of a work of art I don't care for, I try to find something to appreciation about its crafting. I can think of an example easily: the novel Swamplandia, which I believe is an excellently written book and has an ending that I really did not like.
I knew, going into this issue, that it was going to be a tragedy -- in the literal sense of the word. Reading the first few pages only intensified this realization. The word "tragedy" literally kept appearing in my thoughts. And I found myself thinking of tragedies. Hamlet has always been my favorite Shakespeare play; by the end, every major character is killed, including the titular hero. I thought of the film Memento, and how brilliant that movie was despite / in spite of an ending that is a little maddening. I even thought about Watchmen, in which the true villain gains the ultimate victory.
A well-written tragedy can be appreciated.
All that to say: I think I liked the issue.
Journey through it with me, won't you?
1) We start off with a flashback: Ben and Peter are in Aunt May's attic, and it's near the end of the 90s Clone Saga. Ben and Peter have become brothers, Ben is Spidey, and neither knows that he's going to be murdered at the hands of Norman Osborn in the days to come, leading to the return of the "one, true Spider-Man." By fans of the Saga, it's generally considered one of the best moments. But the narration is Ben looking back at this moment, and he points out something very metatextual and very true: "...he came back right when you started feeling comfortable. you know what it means when he comes back." Where's the lie, folks? Behind the scenes, we know that as the writers really started gaining a grasp on Ben as Spidey, giving him a supporting cast and a number of love interests, re-establishing his relationship with heroes and villains, they had the rug pulled out from under them! Peter had to come back. Of course he did.
2) Ben's getting this memory confused with another: he's the Scarlet Spider, and he's with Mary Jane at the beginning of the Saga. Mary Jane is upset and lashes out at Ben; she's worried that Ben wants to take Peter's life away. Between these memories, we get narration from Ben about how badly he DID want Peter's life, that Mary Jane was right. And here, I'd like to say two things: 1) the art is absolutely gorgeous, especially Ben's Scarlet suit; and 2) this was my first indication that the writing of the issue just might be good. I LIKE the way these two scenes were connected, and I think they're honest about what happened back in the 90s. At the start of the Saga, part of Ben DID wish he could have Peter's life, but he knew it wasn't his for the taking. And Peter's return DID come when Ben's had really settled in as Spidey. The stories were really strong, especially the ones that had nothing to do with clones and the Jackal and all that. Ben was moving on... until he was killed.
3) But these memories? They're going away, and we're back with Ben at Beyond in the present. Hobie Brown is asking him what's wrong. That's right: the Slingers get a cameo appearance! And the best part: it's made clear that they know this is Ben! The Scarlet-Slingers continuity from BR:SS remains intact! Ben and the Slingers are literally my favorite superheroes, so I appreciated the added bonus that they are aware of who Ben is, including his name. Dusk wants Ben to remember them, but he replies, "Who says I didn't?" and proceeds to attack. He wants Maxine Danger and nothing is getting in his way.
4) Maxine, meanwhile, is monitoring the situation along with Marcus, who informs her that Spider-Pete is arriving. Maxine decides to "tell the board."
5) MJ is in Peter's ear. She knows Peter is mad because Ben left her at the Bugle with Queen Goblin, but she knows Ben is hurting. It's the empathic MJ we were missing at the beginning of Beyond, but hey -- people are complex! Emotions are tricky!
6) Peter saying "thank you" really made me smile, which I appreciated considering what I knew was coming.
7) Ben finally gets to Maxine, who does good villain dialogue. And whoa: "You and Kafka saw to it that no copies of your implanted memories would be held. All to protect your friend's identity." Good intentions. Good intentions.
8) Maxine puts it all on Ben: he created these problems for himself, from her perspective. But he can fix things: he can use some Beyond tech to get Peter's memories back -- he just needs to get them directly from the source if he wants to heal himself. "Surely, he'll help you."
9) "He's my friend."
10) Ben attacks Maxine, but it's a hologram. She's actually with Marcus, who is informed that he's about to be killed by armed Beyond goons.
11) Elsewhere, Peter and Ben finally find each other. Ben wants Peter to put on the helmet-tech that Maxine gave him, but Peter is understandably wary of using any Beyond tech and tells Ben he can't possibly ask him to do so. Ben isn't asking, however -- and that's a nice callback to the beginning of Beyond (and JMD's current mini) in which Ben expresses his discomfort in asking for help.
12) Back to Marcus, who is being escorted by the kill team. Luckily for him, Janine has stolen a gun called the Infantilizer, and we get our Beyond goofiness for the issue: the kill team turning into babies. Marcus can get Janine out of the building, but she's got other plans.
13) Meanwhile, Ben is telling Peter what it's like in his head -- and the "second person" description is certainly an interesting way of framing it. Ben tells Peter that he isn't allowed to keep his life from him and punches his square in the face. And y'know -- I believe that Ben would act this way in the face of losing his very identity because it's EXACTLY HOW PETER ACTED back in the 90s when he was faced with the realization that he was actually the clone.
14) The banter is still good, though, you guys. "No, because you are!"
15) Put into a no-win situation, what are two overly-emotional superpowered brothers going to do but come to blows? Brothers fight all the time.
16) Oh, and Maxine? She's informing the board of current events, and they inform her that she's no longer needed and is immediately shot -- except, nope! It's another hologram. Of course it is. Maxine says goodbye, for now.
17) Our attention is now directly on Ben and Peter fighting. "You're not the better one, Peter. You're just older. And you hate me because I'm new." MORE EXCELLENT METATEXTUAL WRITING: there was nothing wrong with Ben Reilly being Spider-Man, except that he wasn't Peter. Peter came first, and that's all there is to it. That's all he needed to have fans on his side. Ben was new and bad. Luckily, Peter doesn't feel that way: "I don't hate you!"
18) It doesn't matter. Peter still isn't at peak health, and Ben is able to handily beat him. And hey! We get to see the Spinneret again! Yup, Peter gets wrapped up, snug as a bug. He keeps telling Ben that he wants to help, but Ben rightly asks why, then, he has to make him?
19) Somewhere else, Marcus and Janine have just discovered that Maxine is gone and that the whole Beyond unit is going to be scrubbed, including the lower levels being flooded with "quantum-shifting polymers in a psycho-reactive medium," which "rewrites matter." Not great to be caught in it, especially if {foreshadow} you're people. Janine asks Marcus to help her find Ben...
20) ...who is about to put the helmet on Peter, who's tied up by the spinneret. But not for long: "Janine 04-14."
21) Peter smashes the helmet, and Ben is crushed. He's never going to be whole again. He's going to lose everything that made him who he is. Peter believes there's still something they can do, but Ben flies into a rage and puts Peter in a headlock, who then flips Ben off of him and INTO THE QUANTUM-SHIFTING POLYMER STUFF!!!
22) Peter wants Ben to jump up to him, but it's too late. Ben has already lost himself. It's over. And an explosion blows Peter away...
23)...into the arms of Marcus, who leads Peter out.
THE END.