Originally Posted by
Renjo
These are killer. You obviously know what you're doing in terms of shot composition, the placement of characters and objects in a scene etc. etc. and the depth blur is great in some of these. However, much like what has already been said, I feel there's room for improvement regarding the lines, layering and the white spaces around each outline. It's an easy fix, though - once you learn how to use layer blend modes and different widths of pens and such (sorry for assuming you don't know these things- I may be wrong) then these pics will totally rule. But these are minor things - I'm looking forward to seeing more. I've nothing to say about the story and characters other than I love it all. Keep it up!