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    Ok I Have This Pic and another one that I Redrew at a different angle. Just Trying To Find Out if I Hit The Mark This Time.....What Do You Guys Think? And If You See Something That I Can Improve On Again Let Me Know....All Advice Is Welcome
    Heres The First Image And The Redrawn Image
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    Hey man, nice to see you posting again. It looks much improved to me. I like how you implemented a dramatic camera angle in the new one, and the perspective look better as well. Seems much more dynamic. Also like how the guy getting stomped has become the focal point instead of sortof blending into the mid-ground. I cant really think of anything to criticize, well done.

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    Thanks ghost

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    I like the angle in the new one!

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    The new one seems more polished and adding the sky was a nice touch good job.
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    Thanks i Appreciate The Comments

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    The guy on the right's leg isn't foreshortened enough for that foot. The anatomy on his left arm could better as well, you've drawn a symbol for his hand.

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    Thanks For Pointing That Out To Me Hermit...It Was Still Looking A Little Off To Me I Just Didn't Know What It Was...Now I Know What To Work On....I Got A Little Lazy On The Hand I Admit That
    Much Appreciated If There's Anything Else Please Let Me Know I'm Trying To Get It As Tight As Possible

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    I really prefer the second one. Is this a Morning Glories/American History X mash up?
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    Kinda. I got some "Curb Stomping" references from "American History X" and "Gears Of Wars" It was a fun project and it got me rotating that camera into angles and positions I barley thought about using

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