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    This is damn cool man. The characters work with the watercolour.

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    thanks so much! born out of the necessity for color and the pocket book of a starving artist



    this weeks Sov!

    http://www.nearmintmill.com/comic/th...igncy-three-2/

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    I took a glance at your comic. The art style is very interesting. It's pretty cool. Though, I believe I saw some perspective problems, in that characters weren't sized properly in relation to each other. For example, on this page...
    https://i0.wp.com/www.nearmintmill.c...it=2340%2C9285

    It's hard to tell exactly where your horizon line is, but those two guys in the far background in the panel with the dialogue that says "They just got here before you." look like they're huge. Are those two characters in the front on a totally different plane than the other characters? There isn't enough in the art to signify that. And if they aren't on a different plane, they aren't relating properly to the other objects and characters in the scene at all. "Placing figures in perspective" would be a handy thing to look up if this is a challenge. That skill is vital for any comic artist.

    And the lettering is really, really, really, really, REALLY, really, really, really, REALLY...not good. And bad lettering can spoil an entire comic.

    The characters and figures usually look okay, though!

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    thank you for you comments

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