One thing I noticed about the Seagle and Kelly runs (which, despite the interference, were better than what came before or after) was how they seemed to be written in an editorially-mandated style. Kelly and Seagle both have their own distinctive ways of writing but on X-Men, they both used the Claremont style that had been the X-office's house style for a long time: the bombastic captions, the angsty thought bubbles, the stock phrases. Mark Waid and John Ostrander and other distinctive writers also seemed to lose some of their usual style when they wrote X-stuff.
All of those things are fine from Claremont but the X-office in the Harras era was notorious for insisting that writers include those Claremontian elements, even if the result wound up sounding generic. I once read something on CBR where Joe Casey mentioned that he was originally hired to do the scripting over Davis's plots (after Kelly/Seagle quit), and he suggested modernizing the style by doing without captions and thought balloons. The editors said no and one assistant editor, he recalled, outright laughed at him.
Of course Big Two companies are never known for their stylistic diversity, and a few years later it would be Claremont who got forced to conform to a more modern house style.
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I lament the end of thought bubbles and captions myself. It's part of what led to the "decompressed" standard style we see today. I miss the days when a single issue of a comic contained as much story as a 30-45 min. episode of television. Most contemporary comics equate to about 1/3 of that. It takes less than 5 min. for me to read a typical issue today.
Claremont's flowery prose aside, I disagree that there's anything inherently antiquated about captions and thought bubbles, particularly the former. It all depends on how they're used and each individual writer's style.
I have no problem with captions or thought bubbles, I just think it was a problem that the editorial office enforced that style even when writers didn't want to write that way. And it wasn't just the devices, it was the general writing style. I recently read the X-Men/Brood story from 1996 written by John Ostrander, and I actually liked the story, but much of the dialogue and captions sounded like imitation Claremont, and that's not the way Ostrander usually wrote.
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Claremont's style is his own, but after he was gone, the editors had a habit of trying to fit X-books into that style rather than letting people find their own way. One reason Peter David's X-Factor was a standout book was that it had his voice as a writer.
Claremont was a wonderful author....in the 80s. His return was full of nonsense and threads that were unfinished, jumped in from a "6 month gap" that made no sense, and then pointless stories.
It would've been better to build up to what he wanted to do to have that characterization. The odd changes didn't work since the characters were in multiple books.
Historically, Claremont produced his best stuff when he had a strong editor, e.g. Louise Simonson and Ann Nocenti, to keep him focused and balance him out.
His big return in 2000 was a tragic misfire. He and then editor Mark Powers tried to do too much too fast. There was a kernel of an interesting idea in the Neo--the next step beyond mutants as mutants were beyond humans--but it was too underdeveloped when it saw print to really work.
That is the way I remember it. More like an accumulation of things where they got tired of the interfering. I remember a bunch of things that I read. Psylocke dying in PSI WAR. I remember seeing art work for the Magneto story. Reversing the poles was going to create sort of an ice age. At least they got to tell a Magneto story of sorts. Cyclops's team was going to have a new approach, not exactly Xavier's. Hopefully, it wouldn't have been anything like the last decade plus version. Although I recall nothing in Kelly and Seagle's Cyclops, what they did write of him, that would indiicate that. I just didn't recall ever reading that it was THE TWELVE specifically that caused the departure.
IMO, Kelly wrote a more straight up villain than I would imagine Claremont woud have preferred.
Murdering Odekirk for 50 year old forgeries not holding up. X MEN 85, IMO, does not present Magneto with a legitimate point of view. He tests one random human before he makes his move.
The guy is clearly not inherently anti mutant. When he doesn't get the answers he wants, Magneto basically traumatizes the guy by scaring the crap out of him. Until the guy says what Magneto wants to hear. Meanwhile, the X Men change the minds of a group of policeman initially predisposed to distrust them. Showing that Xavier's dream can work.
It's not that I'm criticizing the issue. I applaud the X Men part. Thay may never win the war, but you have to let them win battles. It can't be every human they encounter hates them. Claremont would do this periodically. They would get small victories. It gives the dream validity.
I'm just saying the issue was very one sided. I don't think it's how Claremont would do it. At least from Magneto's POV. This was just addressing your comments on the conflict between the 3 creators over Magneto's characterization. Writers differed. Some wanted the villain, others the more anti heroic Claremont version.