Originally Posted by
illapu05
My feedback notes:
"Jeff, I don't think this is a bad script at all, but I guess I'm worried that Postal readers don't *gain* anything from this story. It's not connected enough to the larger plot of the comic. Try and find a way to give it context."
I was hmm "confused" in a way because the contest rules are the story should be standalone? I didn't want it to interfere with the larger plot of the comic based on that. But, I will give it more exposition based on this feedback.