looking good! like the choice of angles, they fit for your style. Only thing I can suggest is maybe add some more background in some of your panel shots. You created a dust/smokey atmosphere in the action sequences where the lack of visual background is understandable. So at best pic some of the panels that seeing more backdrop would make sense if that helps.
Having drawn my version of the script already, it's a really good learning experience to see how other people tackle the script. I find myself thinking "that's a much better angle, why didn't I think of that?" And looking at how other people have tackled characters, weapons, backgrounds etc is very inspiring.
Fixing some anatomy issues, and adding more backgrounds. IMG_1248.jpg
@bungo75:
that first panel is my favorite, between the background details and angle, it sets a great tone.
edit update:
page 2 http://justart27.deviantart.com/art/...try2-696878727
this page was a trip to set up.
Last edited by Justart27; 08-04-2017 at 09:22 PM.
Nice work
Loving the positivity in this thread, gang. Great work! Excited for your submissions!
Hello!
Looking forward to submitting my pages - but I'm a bit worried. I've never read Postal, so I am drawing from the information conveyed in the script only. Will I be disqualified if the characters don't look like those portrayed in the comic, even if I manage to be on point with storytelling?
Thanks for your time and communication!
mj
Not speaking as a Top Cow rep, but I would recommend getting a couple of issues of Postal and reading them and referencing them. I'm sure you could even google image search most of the characters if you don't want to spend any money. Research and staying on model for characters would be part of your job as a work for hire artist so I would think that they would want you to display that ability in the contest.
My comicartfans.com collection. Lots of Ryan Ottley:
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Invincible universe wiki (work in progress):
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Also as a non Top Cow rep, I agree with what capuga said. In this thread and in the submission guidelines it's been explained that small changes are fine, but I think drawing without any reference would be an unnecessary risk. Top Cow actually has the first issue of Postal free to download here for some of the references if you wanna check it out: http://topcow.com/moos/43-latest-moo...s-from-top-cow