Originally Posted by
blackspidey2099
Wow, well this issue was a huge letdown from ASM 30 (which I really liked). I think it was in this issue that we saw how contrived and logically inconsistent Slott is willing to let the story be so he can achieve his desired outcome.
In this issue alone, Otto's rampage is almost entirely due to Peter's incompetence. Despite not being a supergenius, I myself can think of hundreds of ways to stop Otto with Peter's much more advanced arsenal - he could have used his magnetic webbing to block the signals from the moment Ock started hijacking his tech, he could have used his nerve hacking technology to shut down Otto's minds from the second he entered the PI building, he could have used his concrete webbing (which held up a freaking skyscraper) to immobilize Ock, he could have used his far superior strength to destroy Ock's tentacles and then beat him physically, he could have used the prep time he had before Ock came to change the frequencies of his tech so Ock couldn't hijack anything, he could have trapped Ock in one of his hard-light forcefields, he could have used his anti-metal spider-tracers to melt all of Ock's equipment, etc etc etc. Peter should have been able to come up with all these methods, and much more.
But the most contrived and stupid part of this issue is how Peter destroys all of Parker Industries work and data for no good reason. According to this comic, Peter Parker, who we are supposed to believe is one of the world's smartest men, doesn't even think of backing up all of his research in a secure location in case of an attack? Heck, he could have sent his data to another dimension for later retrieval, once he knew Ock was coming after him, instead of just destroying it.
Even the ending, which I'm assuming was supposed to be a badass moment with Peter wearing his spandex costume underneath the armor, was stupid and predictable. The second Peter opened up the suitcase, it was painfully obvious he would be wearing his old suit underneath. And of course, Slott's favourite plot device, the EMP, came into play once more. Of course Slott once again forgot that Peter's armor is actually EMP immune (as he himself showed in earlier issues) and shows that he has no clue how EMPs work (for those who don't know, they release a strong magnetic pulse that can induce high electrical currents in electronic equipment and burn out circuitry - they definitely can't shatter anything, especially not an armor that has survived hits from the likes of Hyperion and Hercules). And even if Peter had made a new version that wasn't EMP immune to fight Osborn, how stupid would he have to be to not incorporate EMP immunity into his armor once he saw Osborn destroying it so easily?
I think that's where I realized that this whole storyline was manufactured just to destroy Parker Industries, rather than being a product of natural, organic storytelling. Slott ends up ignoring pretty much all of Peter's abilities (which, ironically, were mostly established by him) and characterization to give his pet character a win, since Ock would have stood no chance without all that heavy plot armor. In that regard, this issue is similar to the equally bad ASM 28 in that it showcases how forced much of Slott's writing has become, with Peter's characterization and abilities being flip flopped at whim to tell a pre-determined story. I think it definitely has come time for Slott to leave this title. If only Slott hadn't taken it upon himself to destroy Parker Industries before he left, so that another (superior) writer could have had the opportunity to properly tackle the wonderful potential this premise had (and which Slott just wasted with his 31 extremely underwhelming issues).