That's the one I don't like, because I don't like Bruce involved with, or even knowing about, Ra's, Talia, or the League of assassins back before he became Batman. I hate it when all the villains have prior connections, especially retconned ones. And I don't like Bruce learning from bad guys (his later training with Shiva and Tim's trainer really irk me), because it often leaves the issue of him either being willing to let them do bad while he learned, or doing nothing about them for the next several years after he learned of evil deeds (because they were retconned into history). But without speed-aging Damian, there aren't a lot of options. If you let Bruce be older (which I prefer), maybe Ra's and Talia could enter the scene when Dick is 14ish and Damian be conceived then.Damian’s origin remains the same. He was conceived shortly before Bruce makes his debut as Batman so his age (give or take a few months) reflects how long Bruce has been batmaning for. Only change I’d make is that Damian never dies but instead is critically injured which leads to Bruce going temporarily off the rails in his attempts to save him.
I don't think Barbara should need to be rescued by an untrained kid, unless you can really sell it. Would have early in her recovery. And a good explanation of why he's where she is. And how does he learn their identities through her? Was she already doing their tech support or he figured out that way, or did she betray their trust and tell him?He finds and rescues out-of-comission Babs and discovered Batman and Robin's identity and also come to them through knowing her,
I agree bashing Jason was built into Tim's intro and that is a problem. Also, I found Tim quite creepy at first. He was fixated on "Batman and Robin" with little regard for the actual individuals. He expected Dick to just give up his entire life to fit in the role he thought Batman needed to be the kind of Batman Tim wanted him to be. Rather dehumanizing towards those two, especially Dick. I've head some attribute it to PTSD. I know little about PTSD, and less about comic-book PTSD, and so all I can say is that it was very disturbing to me, and I was glad when that particular element (not seeing them as people) passed. I also never could buy the notion that he actually regularly followed them around taking pictures and they never noticed.I'd make Tim less of a replacement for Jason because you can't replace a son with a random kid but also because it minimises the need to blame and vilify the dead victim. Tim's intro was built on trashing Jason so I'd get rid of any comparisons to Jason. Rather have bruce only talk about Jason the son not Jason the sidekick.
I did, however, feel that (post-COIE) Jason was much more a replacement for Dick than Tim was for Jason, in-universe (from audience perspective, both were replacements, but Tim more, since Dick has been so long working elsewhere). They had Bruce do a great disservice to Jason in that version. He even called the poor kid Robin instead of by his name when he took him home. Bruce said he took him on as a partner because he missed Dick. I think Alfred even called him a "replacement son" (to Tim). Tim wasn't Bruce's child, and for a lot of (real world) years did not have any kind of parent/child relationship with Bruce.
I don't think it was created to save those boys. I think it was created to give one boy the opportunity to do what Bruce himself wished he could do at that age, after his own parents were murdered. Later others got it for other reasons.Robin is a mantle created to save at risk young boys and give them purpose it wasn't created to endanger safe and stable young boys. That's what Tim's origin turned Robin into.