Glad you retconned DoTI... "Triton is alive. What did it cost?" "Gorgon." -sobs-
Unfortunately I have no constructive criticism to give :/
I feel kinda... bittersweet saying that but an alliance between mutants and inhumans would make me happy or at least less dreary(?) about everything.
also, maybe creating a new thread for it would get more attention? (if you want to!) I think you deserve it, you did some good work here. edit: if its allowed