I wouldn't mind if we don't get any of those confrontations. They could make sense for an Iron Man-Doom, but that's not what this book is really about, isn't it? The less it ties with other books, the happier I well be... But it's not impossible that tony was aware of something to come - thus the discussion is supposed to have with victor when he trapped him in that field... I don't expect much but perhaps that part of the plot of the previous Bendis Iron Man book will make sense one day, and the new Victor's path will lead to something in the MU...
Yes, Maleev and Hollingsworth are doing great. Mostly moody and dark as you said, especially in those pages, but in a way that enlightens the magic when both Cynthia and Victor use it (on a side note, I like the use of greek alphabet or japanese hiragana syllabary in Cynthia's spells : I can read "spin lukhs" - spin lights - in greek but can't make sense of the japanese : u-ka-se-be-i or something like that...).
I must say that's also one of the reasons I liked the previous issue : I know that many disagree with the disarray of Latveria as if it was Victor's fault, but it was one of the first time that Latveria seemed to me really European. Memories of the wars in ex-Yugoslavia - on TV - and - more personal ones - of the last years of the USSR or of Saint Petersburg in 2000... Of course one could argue that Victor should have been clever enough to manage a better transition to a new power for his beloved country, but that's also the point. Victor's epiphany is about to let it go - I mean the ruling thing (he ruled the universe !) - he did it quick and made the understandable mistake that the average human beings would set things right by themselves... Pity humans!
In fact I like the voice of Ben in the book. I can even understand why he acted so bad in his search of Doom... He mourns his family and the fight - that wasn't really shown - in Cambridge or London - not in NY IIRC - was a way to feel like in the good old days. How to act in this new situation? Bendis talked about that in one interview I think, and I can get into that stuff.
I also think that his almost laconic Doom is pertinent to the situation : Victor doesn't really know how to act with people normally and his new persona is like a new armour he doesn't really know how to use... I really liked the last page of the previous issue because of that : the meeting between Victor and Ben was full of emotions, with very few words... IMHO it works quite well...
Anyway you're perfectly right about Ben(dis?)'s mistake about Cynthia and the coven... (thinking about that, could Cynthia have had some relationship with Wanda's mother? I stopped reading Scarlet Witch very soon, but we saw her mother in the woods, didn't we?).
And it could be the first of... many unforgettable mistakes to come
... lol...