I loved the art, but the story is wrong in all kinds of ways. Anyone else think so? To me, every writer should ask himself, would this be cool if I was watching a movie? This would have came off like total crap in a movie. Han trying to step on Vader with an AT-AT, Luke running into him, what Vader was saying. Vader's helmet coming off like it did (the helmet doesn't work like that at all).

Just bugged the hell out me.